The Special Rose

She sits and rocks, so gently back and forth
Her chin leaning heavily on her chest.
In her hands she cradles, one flat waxed rose
And sighs as pain is swelling in her breast.

Her long grey hair, now tied up in a bun
Is what I see when entering the room.
I helplessly watch, her tear drops flowing,
They look like dew, upon the lonely bloom.

Slowly she looks at a picture nearby,
A glimpse of a smile creases her face.
Granddad with her, stand on their wedding day
With red roses, and a dress of white lace.

After the wedding, she said with a smile,
I took this one rose and waxed it back then.
Granddad had laughed at me wondering why.
I said, for the special memories when…….

And now this old rose, I hold in my hand,
Precious memories kept in my drawer
I pull it out remembering the day
When granddad loved me, and I loved him more.


Written by Brenda Meier-Hans 
11.25.2014
Contest: Encounters with Flowers 
5th
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Bocsa Avatar
December 9, 2014 at 2:19 PM
A Rose for Emily and Great Expectations are also poetical,but not poetry.With deep admiration and happy to visit you.
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 22, 2014 at 6:08 AM
Thank you so much Ovidiu
Roberts Avatar
December 2, 2014 at 5:02 PM
loved it Brenda, congratulations....Seren
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 2, 2014 at 5:30 PM
Thanks so much Seren
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December 1, 2014 at 9:00 AM
Beautiful, sweet, sentimental...simply exquisite, Brenda! Congrats to you!! Hugs, Rhonda
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 2, 2014 at 5:30 PM
Thanks Rhonda.
Deschler Avatar
November 30, 2014 at 5:55 PM
A very special rose, indeed... This touching poem is one of those that just tugs at our hearts... A lovely write, Brenda! Congratulations on your well deserved win!
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 30, 2014 at 6:44 PM
Thanks so much Kelly.
Kayode Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 11:49 PM
You style of writing is so captivating,how beautiful is this again Brenda ! Congrats on the win.
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 30, 2014 at 6:43 PM
Thank you so much for your kind words Kayod5
Lawless Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 8:20 PM
PISSA!!! LOVE THIS POEM, BRENDA. It builds slowly and finishes with a brilliant aria in the last couplet. BRAVO...
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 10:59 PM
Thank you John.
Guzzi Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 7:43 PM
Oh a number one for me and a fav! great writing! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 10:57 PM
Thank you so much Debbie.
Yvonne Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 3:44 PM
Number one in my eyes. I love this brilliant write. To me Brenda you have always been that special rose. You are so talented. Love you, Congratulations on your fine win.
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 5:00 PM
Ah, Maurice. Thanks from the bottom of my heart.
Stoner Jr Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 3:25 PM
way to go Brenda on another fine win,keep em coming :o)
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 5:02 PM
Gladly Robert and thanks.
Haight Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 1:48 PM
Absolutely so beautiful, Brenda. Just read this for the first time and see you won in the contest! Your poem brought a tear to my eye. Congratulations to you! 7+Fav, Hugs, Sandra
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 5:01 PM
Thank you so much Sandra.
Carmack Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 12:51 PM
Congrats Brenda.
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 4:59 PM
Thanks Rob.
Gibson Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 11:56 AM
So sweet, Brenda...you did a great job with this. Love it. Congratulations.
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 12:26 PM
Thank you Faye
Allison Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 11:23 AM
dropping back with my congrats Brenda:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 12:26 PM
Thanks Jan.
Yvonne Avatar
November 27, 2014 at 8:12 PM
Brilliant, a definite fav. Just Brilliant.
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 12:03 AM
Thanks Maurice. I'm glad you like it.
Hamilton Avatar
November 27, 2014 at 4:35 PM
this is a wonderful pen Brenda roses are my favourite flower and you have done them proud gl in contest hugs
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 27, 2014 at 8:06 PM
Thanks so much Shadow.
Mcdaid Avatar
November 26, 2014 at 6:14 AM
heart touching powerful pen brenda truly everlasting memory bless you
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 26, 2014 at 5:32 PM
Thanks Liam.
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November 25, 2014 at 3:37 PM
Hi Brenda! Memories like these are nostalgic and yet where would we be without them! In your case there is something tangible to hold, not just the memory! I was touched and enjoyed...#7 // paul
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November 25, 2014 at 3:46 PM
Thanks so much Paul.
Horne Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 3:12 PM
awww, very touching, my friend
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 3:46 PM
Thank you Jack.
Smith Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 2:42 PM
So lovely and moving Brenda...hugs Tim
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 2:47 PM
Thank you Tim.
Meade Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 2:20 PM
Wonderful tribute -- such are the blessings of our loved ones!!
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 2:47 PM
Thanks David.
Allison Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 2:12 PM
such a lovely nostalgic poem so beautifully penned with wonderful imagery Brenda - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 2:46 PM
Thank you so much Jan.
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