Simplicity is taken for granted. Complication comes with the mind. Simplicity
is the result of a peaceful heart. Give me the simple heart filled with peace and faith..
I walked upon a sparrow sitting on a limb, her little feathers wet and mottled from a spring swim, she played and picked then shook her fragile body, stretching her head out with a nod, she settled down, nestled, she closed her little eyes, quietly, without worry. As she awoke she expressed her happiness with joyous song and weightless sigh, all the while, I watch in awe and wonder; how nice it must be to have a tree, to sit under, ...free, warm from the new morning sun; Ah yes, I should like to be a sparrow today, nothing to do but sing and pray. kfay0314
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