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The Space between Stars

The sky is marvellous tonight, it’s fraught with possibilities of windswept cliffs. It’s dark out here in space, but just a thought - heavenly bodies found in hieroglyphs. And yet, the stars are far and few between, as feared. Navigating ebon, it’s clear that forms and beams of light are unforeseen. For who out here can find the Bard, Shakespeare? Look! See! What a beauty! Hourglass figure, that beaming bod. She’s dressed in blue and bright. The hottest star, you could not prefigure. At verge of light, can you see she’s just right? Don’t forsake space. The faithful find the light. A soulmate far away. She’s out of sight.

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Date: 10/28/2024 9:47:00 PM
Wow! Thanks for sharing these words of wisdom. Thanks likewise for your uplifting comments. God bless you.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/29/2024 6:27:00 AM
God bless you too! Thank you, sweet poet!
Date: 10/27/2024 8:28:00 AM
'The faithful find the light' - i don't know ,am I one of them, I wonder sometimes. I know God, Christ is in my life and my thoughts are with religion often, but i have not gone to church in ages, my excuse is moving from the East Rand to Johannesburg three years ago.I wonder, will I find the light, I hope so. Kim I think this poem is a winner and applaud you for this write. Hugs and blessings Jennifer. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/27/2024 11:35:00 AM
Thank you, Jennifer. If you want to dialogue soupmail me. Hugs and blessings xx
Date: 10/26/2024 9:27:00 AM
just wonderful, i love stars and the excellent metaphor, thanks poet
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/26/2024 7:27:00 PM
Thank you so much, Yann!
Date: 10/25/2024 7:35:00 PM
Nice poem, Kim, I'm going to go outside and look for that hourglass figure in the sky!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/26/2024 8:23:00 AM
LOL…yay! Hope you find what you’re looking for :)
Date: 10/25/2024 4:12:00 PM
Hey, Kim-nator- good to read this tonight, been away...."And yet, the stars are far and few between, as feared." very true
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/26/2024 8:24:00 AM
Hope you meet up with that one bright one, the perfect one! Hugs

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