The Sound of Sunset

sunset screams so loud
fighting through dark thunder clouds
gold sound river bound



Cynthia
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Pettit Avatar
August 30, 2012 at 12:42 AM
The sunset "screams" especially loud when I'm driving directly into it on a westbound highway. That's when I wish I had a good pair of sunglasses. Good haiku.
A   Avatar
August 29, 2012 at 5:24 PM
Cynthia, lol....no no! i hate the screaming sun ... I'm more of a night gal... but that golden sparkling river sounds dreamy,,, i might go take a walk to look and stare... love it... xox~PD
Komala Avatar
August 29, 2012 at 10:40 AM
ah,, yes luv this Cynthia..wonderful write :) SK
Andresen Avatar
August 29, 2012 at 10:25 AM
Cynthia, it is beautiful. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Alvez Avatar
August 29, 2012 at 10:39 AM
Thank you Anne...I love writing Haiku poetry. Cynthia
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