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The Sound of Sunset

sunset screams so loud fighting through dark thunder clouds gold sound river bound Cynthia

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Robert Pettit

Date: 8/30/2012 12:42:00 AM

The sunset "screams" especially loud when I'm driving directly into it on a westbound highway. That's when I wish I had a good pair of sunglasses. Good haiku.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/29/2012 5:24:00 PM

Cynthia, lol....no no! i hate the screaming sun ... I'm more of a night gal... but that golden sparkling river sounds dreamy,,, i might go take a walk to look and stare... love it... xox~PD

Sukmawati Komala

Date: 8/29/2012 10:40:00 AM

ah,, yes luv this Cynthia..wonderful write :) SK

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/29/2012 10:25:00 AM

Cynthia, it is beautiful. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Cynthia Alvez
Date: 8/29/2012 10:39:00 AM

Thank you Anne...I love writing Haiku poetry. Cynthia