The Sound of Steam

It’s cold outside, but from a dream
I wake up to the sound of steam.
The room is toasty, opportune
For staying in my snug cocoon.

The gentle hiss as background noise
My half-asleep self quite enjoys,
A remnant of when I was small,
My brothers sleeping down the hall.

To make the coming day seem rosy,
There is nothing near as cozy
As that warming welcome hiss,
Deceiving us that naught’s amiss.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Johnson Avatar
November 24, 2014 at 1:23 PM
Now that's a steamy write. :)
Bauer Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 2:10 PM
ha! thank you, robert! guess you're as short on time as i am lately - this is a rare unrhymed comment from you!
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 23, 2014 at 7:49 PM
Memories ahhh, precursor of a beautiful day! I enjoyed the journey into your past in this well written piece Ilene!
Bauer Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 2:10 PM
thanks for your sweet comment, connie! it means a lot...
Martin Avatar
November 23, 2014 at 6:05 PM
Ilene: I love this interlude into the world of steam, dreams and memories - all very well interwoven by your creative touch:) Also, thank you for the earlier visit. It's always a pleasure to hear from you. Warm hugs, Terry
Bauer Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 2:09 PM
it's an equal pleasure to hear from you, terry! i'm very appreciative - sorry it's taken me so long to reply. i'm a bit pressed for time these days...
Fleming Avatar
November 23, 2014 at 12:19 PM
A delightful little poem...well done! :)
Bauer Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 2:08 PM
thank you very much, john! i appreciate the comment...
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