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~1st Place~
Contest: Lyrics Cliche Image
Sponsor: Silent One
Judged: 05/14/2016
Cliche: 'The writing on the wall'- Photo: 5
Inspired by the song: 'Sound of Silence', by Disturbed

Entered In The Contest, "Babel," April 9, 2024
Sponsor, Sotto Poet

The Sound Of Silence



The sound of silence- writing on the wall;
   do not disturb their sound of silence song.
They turn their back- aversion to the brawl;
   it's not our problem- license for their wrong.

They know, and without looking, close their eyes;
   it's not our problem- so they shut their ears.
The sound of silence rings throughout his cries-
   the victim now, abandoned, with his fears.

The writing on the wall- the message sent;
   the victim stands alone- his hour of death.
Their eyes and ears are shut to his torment;
   the sound of silence heard in his last breath.

It's not our problem, 'sound of silence' screams.
   Their backs are turned, alone the victim lies;
the writing on the wall negates his dreams
   of strangers who could stop his sad demise.

So like a cancer silence soon surrounds-
   much harder to react than walk away;
creates a barrier to sights and sounds.
   It's not our problem- sounds of silence say.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Promise Avatar
May 18, 2016 at 12:53 AM
Congrats on your fine win in the contest, Sandra, Hugs, RP.
May Avatar
May 14, 2016 at 7:19 PM
Congratulations on a great win Sandra..
Haight Avatar
May 14, 2016 at 7:21 PM
Thank you, Joseph. Sandra
Rodrigues Avatar
May 14, 2016 at 5:28 PM
Nice one! Congratulations!
Haight Avatar
May 14, 2016 at 7:21 PM
Thank you very much, Kim. Hugs, Sandra
La France Avatar
May 14, 2016 at 11:00 AM
C O N G R A T U L A T I O N S!! on your win with this excellent pentameter poem
Haight Avatar
May 14, 2016 at 4:38 PM
Thank you very much, Broken Wings! Hugs, Sandra
Dietrich Avatar
April 14, 2016 at 8:00 PM
Love how you were inspired. I also love your choices of inspiration.
Haight Avatar
April 16, 2016 at 12:27 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea. Hugs, Sandra
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