The Sound of Silence

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This scribble has nothing to do with the famous song of Simon and Garfunkel.  It's just a story I invented. 

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I bought a cottage in the middle of nowhere,
Right at the edge of the countryside,
Any curious men rarely visited it,
So I stocked it well with food
And worked all alone on my laptop
Electric poles provided current.
So I could enjoy the peace
Within the sound of silence.

I had left the cities full of noise,
Only songbirds broke the silence of the site,
But that I could bear well enough.
Within the sound of silence.

Winter came and soon I was snowbound.
That’s when a knock sounded on my door.
Reluctantly I opened up my place.
There, on the threshold stood a woman
All drenched up and with flimsy clothes.
Her beauty stunned me. I let her in.
My car has stopped, she stammered.
So I sent her up to have a hot bath,
Gave her my dressing gown and invited her
To partake in a hot chicken broth 
and some ill-prepared food.
And all this was done as I stood
Mute but mesmerised by her allure
For it was the time for silence.

Bad weather kept her imprisoned in my home,
Few words were exchanged
But she felt the power of silence.

A week later, the countryside was clear of snow.
She phoned a garage to pick up her car.   
Then I decided to take her on the river,
How beautiful she looked in her proper clothes.
We got in a boat and paddled away to an islet.
We disembarked and partook of a picnic she had prepared
We spoke little but we came close.
She smiled and timidly I kissed her for the first time.
I felt my heart throbbing but all was quiet
Within the sound of silence.

We married a year later and eventually
The cottage was soon filled 
With the crying of a newborn sound.
We were elated and made such a fuss.
Gone was the sound of silence.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 5/31/2024 5:18:00 AM
Love to hear Love at First Sight. I just knew the kiss was going to be done. Hahaha. It's such a thrilling story when the kids ask how he met Mum, they'll be stunned by it.
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Date: 5/29/2024 10:45:00 PM
o love the pucnh line, what would be a cottage without a princess, your poem is so touching and creative, a success indeed, bravo poet
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Date: 5/29/2024 2:58:00 AM
A pleasurable read, Victor, and a delightful trailing to said pleasures that entertain our ears, Sahha Aloha, William
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Date: 5/28/2024 8:31:00 AM
Great storytelling and imagination...
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Date: 5/27/2024 8:43:00 PM
Your stories are always a treat, and make me eager for the next one, Victor. I love the delightful ending, with a newborn baby's cry. :)
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Date: 5/27/2024 7:09:00 PM
Dear Victor, you are a gifted storyteller. A verse full of intrigue and romance. I adore how the “sound of silence” evolved in your poem.. like a third character. Such a great finale when the sounds of silence, are happily, no more. Superb poetry my friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 5/27/2024 6:07:00 PM
Coming from a romantic's heart, Victor. Despite being trapped in your house by bad weather, she fully sensed the strength of silence—the change in the last verse is great. Loving sounds break the stillness! Using passionate language, you may create a captivating tale! A Fave
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Date: 5/27/2024 5:41:00 PM
The newborn, as newborns do, broke the sound of silence. Nice to read, dear Victor!
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Date: 5/27/2024 11:49:00 AM
What a romantic man you are, you tell a great story of love :)
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Date: 5/27/2024 4:45:00 AM
Though inclement weather confined her to your residence, she keenly felt the potency of silence. Although your interactions were characterized by brevity, and few words were exchanged, she felt that power, which led to total commitment. Beautiful poem dear Victor...Hugs
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Date: 5/27/2024 4:37:00 AM
I get that last line very well. Creative way to describe the sounds of silence. Very alluring with a romantic touch. I enjoyed reading it. Sara K
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Date: 5/27/2024 4:35:00 AM
From the heart of a romantic, Victor. I like the turn in the ending stanza-- sound of love fills silence! You know how to weave a story in words of passion!
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Date: 5/27/2024 4:26:00 AM
A lovely romantic story, Victor. A refreshing pause from the ills of the world. Blessings ~
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Date: 5/27/2024 1:32:00 AM
The silence was certainly golden Victor, an enjoyable read with a surprising ending, splendidly done… Beryl
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Date: 5/27/2024 12:10:00 AM
Oh my, my! There you go again, Victor the incorrigible romantic! Jokes apart, beautifully narrated, you are a remarkable raconteur
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