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The Sound of Silence

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Written on October 25, 2023

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Whispering softly on the faded beach, silence Erasing melancholy with a gentle peace, soundless Aching to release the stirring of grace, soothing Sincere, serene, like a dying wish, vanishing, soothing Caressing the shores with tender kisses, in silence Promising joy that never lets the spirit doubt, soundless Disgraced by the darkness, intimate and believing, soundless Stardust laughter prepares the heart to know quiet soothing Wonders beyond expression, the reason for the soul’s silence Sweet silence, soundless as nightfall, soothing the darkness

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Date: 11/17/2023 2:42:00 PM
Congratulations on your name being on the winners' list. Way to go. Sara K
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Date: 11/16/2023 4:17:00 PM
I like the alliteration you have included in your write, Regina. Congratulations on your award - I'd give it a 10 also. A delightful tritina.
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Date: 11/15/2023 8:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely/peaceful ~ write/pretty picture. I enjoyed it... Have a blessed day writing away...........
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Date: 11/14/2023 11:08:00 AM
Very soothing sounds in this one, congratulations on your placement
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Date: 10/26/2023 1:33:00 PM
I found this poem just so comforting. I liked the words: sweet silence, soundless as nightfall. Those words truly 'spoke' to me. You captured silence so well with your imagery and alliterations. Perfect. Enjoy your evening, Sara
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Date: 10/25/2023 10:58:00 AM
I can feel the calmness of silence and tranquillity. This is a lovely poem Gina..
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