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The Sound of Silence

A ritardando
Pianissimo
Caesura        shhhhhhhh_______
              Heaven

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/26/2011 3:39:00 PM

AHA, a unique little piece right here that amazingly I have not seen yet. It is so cool how you did this one, Daver. ARe you still writing Amy, your mutual music lover? I bet you have wonderful conversations about the music you love so much. LUv, Andrea

Date: 4/10/2010 12:46:00 PM

What an interesting poem presented in an artistic way. Glad I ran into this one today. Sometimes I like to go back and read older posts for a bit of variety. You have me smiling with your last line. Nice one! Karen

Date: 3/14/2010 10:10:00 AM

Glad I ran into this creative poem again. It's certainly attests to your talent to make the most of a few words. I like the way the title and last line work together. Wonderful! Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Karen

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 11/14/2008 5:27:00 PM

Very clever use of classical music expressions and a most appropriate title! BRAVO!! Keith

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/11/2008 12:50:00 PM

Everyone has said it before me, but this poem is wonderful! Amen to every comment...the silence is deafening! You are gifted with your incredible imagination! ~ Carrie

Christopher Higgins

Date: 11/11/2008 5:37:00 AM

An incredible write. You are always a joy to read, especially the Haiku. Great work. Chris

I Have Forgiven You But It Will Never Be The Same

Date: 11/10/2008 5:31:00 AM

wow.... thats amazing

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 11/9/2008 12:19:00 PM

This is just awesome. I just love the silence; it's like taking a rest. I went to a concert last week and it was just amazing. I needed that for my soul. Great job! ~Joseph

Deneen White

Date: 11/8/2008 5:26:00 PM

an interesting reflection with a twist of surprise, take care D-ncye

Michael Torres

Date: 11/6/2008 1:59:00 PM

Wow the sounds of silence. Beautifuly done Daver. Congratulations on an exceptional write. Very creative and well thought of. God's blessings to you. Michael Torres

Sharon Winter

Date: 11/6/2008 5:45:00 AM

Expressed through music, even more beautiful. I hear the gentle ending (in piano), and then the heaven you write of. Brilliant! Love, Shar

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 11/5/2008 6:36:00 PM

Daver, I have no idea what this means, but all I know is the sound of silence is a DREAM come true in this crazy household! lol Love Kristin

Lisa Cooper

Date: 11/5/2008 5:32:00 PM

great pen, Music silences the demons and some wonder if there really is angels. Angels are muses in disguise. thank you for your lovely pen.

Date: 11/5/2008 4:49:00 PM

Love the sound of silence--so peaceful. I really like the creative format in this one. The end left me smiling. Blessing to you for sharing your talent with us. Thank you for taking time to comment on my poem. Karen

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 11/5/2008 4:21:00 PM

Oh this is wonderful..the sound of silence. Good job. BG

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