The Sound

The sound of thunder, wind and the rain.
The sound of my heart in sorrow and pain.

The sound of your footsteps I still hear on the stairs,
sitting at the table with my crying face. 

The sound of the children crying for their dad.
Our hearts are empty, confused and very sad.

The sound of your laughter still rings in my ear,
when you left I'm here living in fear.

The sound of your voice calling for my name
you left me alone, tell me who to blame? 

The sound of your car you drove that night with me.
The lights that blinded you, the road you couldn’t see.

The sound of open door, no smile and no face,
you left that night away, to the unknown place.

The sound of crying angels, NO sound of beating heart.
The death that stood between us, the death split us apart.

The sound of empty heart, the sound of empty soul,
the sound one day will break ,when I’m ready to let you go.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 10/19/2013 11:46:00 PM
Elizabeth... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. Goodnight poet friend <3 =)LINDA
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Elizabeth Jubenville
Date: 10/21/2013 1:22:00 AM
Thank you Linda, always nice to hear from you....:)
Date: 10/18/2013 7:01:00 AM
so heart felt Elizabeth congrats on being featured a fine poem Shadow x smile
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Elizabeth Jubenville
Date: 10/18/2013 10:00:00 AM
Thank you, I sincerely appreciate you taking the time,.... :)
Date: 10/9/2013 12:52:00 AM
wow, a very intense write!! Well done. Is it for the heart contest?
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Elizabeth Jubenville
Date: 10/12/2013 12:45:00 AM
Thank you Andrea, I appreciate your comment........ :)
Date: 10/5/2013 11:45:00 PM
I truely enjoyed to read this and not the painful moment only,your love behind the sad words.Good write
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Elizabeth Jubenville
Date: 10/6/2013 11:10:00 AM
Litan Dey, I thank you very much for taking the time and nice comment... :)
Date: 9/26/2013 10:33:00 AM
Interesting lines penned..Enjoyed reading today..Emotive work that brings a tear..Sara
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Elizabeth Jubenville
Date: 9/26/2013 9:48:00 PM
Thank you very much Sara, for stopping by...... :)
Date: 9/26/2013 9:11:00 AM
Good day Elizabeth, wow! I can't help but feel sad.. Very deep, the emotions are raw. I sense a number drawn from holding on so tight... It's never easy letting go... I should know..I still hold on tight to that sound... always~ Linda
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Elizabeth Jubenville
Date: 9/26/2013 9:43:00 PM
As always, thank you for taking the time..... :)
Date: 9/26/2013 4:57:00 AM
Nice write on sound, Elizabeth
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Elizabeth Jubenville
Date: 9/26/2013 9:40:00 PM
Thank you very much.....
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