The Soul That Lies Within

Mine lonely tears fell,
into that sea of sadness.
The sea in which I've drowned.
till the day I saw thine eyes,
and the soul that lies within.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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June 25, 2012 at 9:31 AM
great vision of better days,nice write Daniel
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March 30, 2012 at 4:45 AM
Where did this week go I wonder again. But hey I have enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Daniel. I hope you have a wonderful weekend filled with joy and happiness. Keep writing and sharing your poetry. Love, Carol
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March 29, 2012 at 7:20 AM
A touching Tanka Daniel..really lovely xx Hugs
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