The Soul I Sold

The Soul I Sold


In the dream I dreamed last night.
The world was dark and cold.
I had returned back into hell.
To retrieve the soul I sold.

Surrounded by my enemies.
Not one friend did I see.
I tried to save another.
The way that He saved me.

As I looked all around me.
I heard the souls that cried.
My enemy stayed hidden.
From the light I had inside.

Finally I found my soul.
It was lost and all alone.
I laid hold upon it.
And I claimed it as my own.

Throughout my journey into hell.
I was constantly under attack.
They could no longer hurt me.
And I did not fight back.

I found another lying there.
Her heart was broke in two.
I reached out to hold her.
And I carried her out too.

Edwin C Hofert
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Timperley Avatar
March 26, 2015 at 3:28 PM
Very well thought out poem. A champion in the underworld. God Bless. D. I'm off to my bed now but I have red flagged you and will red some more soon. You have a fan! The validation code for this is 4am. I wrote one called 2-45 in the morning. D.
Rizvi Avatar
March 26, 2015 at 11:27 AM
Intro is amazing...very well written poem keep it up all the readers found their soul in your poem...God bless you..
Vaso Avatar
March 17, 2015 at 9:25 PM
That is a very creative, deep, beautiful poem!
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