-------------------------The Soul I Sold------------

If I seem down forgive me Frowns I carry around live in me When I break you see right through me GIVE BACK THE SOUL I SOLD... The hurt I’ve learned brews in me GIVE BACK THE SOUL I SOLD... Your words so true renew me If only you'd re-design me Take time rewind refine me Recreate the mold without lies I’ve told... GIVE BACK THE SOUL I SOLD... The hurt I’ve learned brews in me GIVE BACK THE SOUL I SOLD....
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Cheesman Avatar
May 25, 2012 at 5:15 AM
wow.....really like this poem JS, i feel the vulnerability and the loss. Thank you for sharing - Shaz
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March 3, 2012 at 6:25 AM
Ooo awesome me likey...this is going in my favs xx Hugs
Goff Avatar
February 19, 2012 at 7:06 AM
whooosh! I understand! well written again! JSL! jimbo
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February 18, 2012 at 10:30 PM
a sad lament JS but a deep emotional cry for help with a determined spirit.. your soul is your mind and u wouild not want to be void of that luv..the spirit man crying out .. touching words luv..
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February 15, 2012 at 5:32 AM
Wow like this one, well done a lot of thought in here xx
Sivey Avatar
February 14, 2012 at 5:05 PM
Wow Joey, this is truly a fabulous write! The line, "GIVE BACK THE SOUL I SOLD" is an incredible statement in your poem...it makes your poem so powerful! I really enjoyed this poem of yours, it's a cut above your usual excellent write! Great Work!!
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