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She walked unawre on sinking sands. Thinking, ah..the world was so grand. What a huge mistake! Her trust of fellow poets!Too great! Defaming her name in a poem?? The sea's foam urged her to roam. Bullying her was simply not enough. "Let's insult her,let's get real rough!" Have at it poets, it shows your soul. Cancel her, quilled brutally is your goal! This site is dear poets, for all views! How low you crawled, the two of you! I feel no brotherhood nor freedom here! Just vicious poets out to hurt and smear... You taught me a lesson, not to trust! Sweetness here....is a total bust  I will treasure the few friends I have  here forever. "Freedom" is the worst, poets here think. Preferring lies in black, shiny Gestapo ink. I don't think Admin encourages such treacherous action. Alas, destruction of a fellow poet brings to you, savage, bloody satisfaction? And so, good night,I wish you the best. We shall see if you pass God's final test. How we weep over the dead in history so long ago! But bury living poets here,eyes blind but our hearts, full of joy and aglow! This is the saddest moment, this Poetess had in years. On her nightgown, rivers of moonlit, salty, tears.                 8/14/2021                 1:30a.m.

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Date: 8/17/2021 10:29:00 AM
Want to thank the hundreds of you who read this poem. This was an impassioned poem..for sure. You should see the emais I have in response? Blew me away. Had no idea there was a gang here, out to defame and shame other poets, they work in tandem. Like the Mafia or the gangs in Chicago...you haven't seen them fight in a POTD as I have, their hatred is great, Look at the number of reads and few responses. Poets know they would end up on a hit list. This is their site. PR
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Date: 8/16/2021 5:50:00 AM
Being creative is a special talent, and gift. You have taken these attributes and put them into your poetry. They are always wonderful to read and enjoy.
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/16/2021 2:04:00 PM
Hello Elena, I do my best Glad you enjoy them Love PANAGIOTA
Date: 8/15/2021 9:05:00 AM
I agree with Darlene and Joe. Do not let this get you down. Keep creating! I enjoy your poetry. I see the comments of others as well. Write for all of us. Write for yourself.
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/15/2021 12:14:00 PM
Madelyn, As I told Anthony, I cannot do this alone. I want to drag people out of closets and stop being sheep. Fat chance. Everyone is hiding, so I take the heat.. Nonsense, pure nonsense,it’s a Marxist universe here. The leader of China would love it.Do you really think I can outdo the lies of CNN, The White House, Congress and the guns they have! I an talking to the wind in an canyon. Our fate is sealed. Nobody will tell the truth I mean,,,nobody. A few of us try,but the tsunami of lies has drowned almost everyone, Big Brother has landed Love, Panagiota
Date: 8/15/2021 7:21:00 AM
we desperately need your diversity of thought here'
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/15/2021 12:01:00 PM
Yes, I know! It’s too much, bend over and do as you are told. Worse, the strong here hiding in closets. Great way to lose a country. The desire for popularity and readership shuts poets up. Panagiota
Date: 8/15/2021 7:02:00 AM
Hello Panagiota, This poem is sad. i agree with Joe Dimino, Do not let this get you down. You are a fighter. You can get through this. Keep creating poetry. hugs xx
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/15/2021 3:35:00 PM
Hello Panagiota, I am pleased to hear that I give you the strength you need. Love Darlene xx
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/15/2021 11:58:00 AM
Dear Darlene, I appreciate you...you give me strength! Love, Panagiota
Date: 8/15/2021 5:38:00 AM
Pangie -- Ila and I think your poetry is great, and we think you are great. As that song goes "Count our blessings...ect." Whoever they are, don't let them get you down. Expect to see a new brilliant write from you tomorrow. Love, Ila and Joe.
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/15/2021 11:56:00 AM
Prince De Mino,,,hugs to you and Ila.THEY TRY HARD,! Good luck Bringing down a fellow poet? Jealous much?);;; Will post later today, .. Love you both, you are so real! , ****Panagiota ****

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