The Sonnet Man Sees

When I stop to observe and think at length,
I see why the twig wants to be a tree,
While standing in the shadow of such strength,
Reminded of what he could never be.
The twig could never achieve such a girth,
Though his desire grows every day,
Because this mass was predestined at birth,
Before the seed had received the sun's ray.
The finished product is all the twig views,
Because this height is all that the twig knows,
Since he does not want to hear the real news
About how long it took the tree to grow.
       He should abandon his need to be big,
       And find a use for himself as a twig.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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August 19, 2011 at 2:13 AM
Doc, Congratulations on your wonderful poem being featured this week. I'm thrilled to be back here on the soup. Now I have time to check on all of the featured poems of the week. Plus more.. Have yourself a great one,.. always ~p.d.
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August 16, 2011 at 1:24 PM
Many congrats on your featured piece, regards Janette
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August 15, 2011 at 8:30 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Doc. Love, Carol
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August 14, 2011 at 11:30 PM
congrats dakari on your featured poem this week on PS... super one to share luv..
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June 11, 2010 at 5:31 AM
wise way in your write about excepting to be a twig, i mean nice way of imagery of a twig, have your self a nice one Doc.,..p..d.
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