The Song Writer

You look deep into his eyes,
you see he's witnessed a lot,
he's tasted good times pleasures,
the taste sometimes to his loss.

His mother she disowned him,
said son you've darkened my door,
your presence is no longer needed
go away, don't shame us no-more.

With a heavy heart breaking,
a head that was scuffing the ground,
he picked up is battered old guitar
and headed for nashvilles  sound.

To cut a long story short,
the man is a genius to word,
he chased his dream like a dragon,
he persisted until he was heard.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 3/26/2009 8:28:00 AM
WWWOOOOWWwwwEEEeee....A MUSCIAN YOU NUST BE CAUSE THAT SOUNDS LIKE MUSIC TO ME...
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Date: 11/27/2008 7:54:00 PM
'...he persisted until he was heard,' ...yeah! It seems the best songwriters have suffered somewhere along the line. A great piece Ann! Love, Keith
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Date: 11/25/2008 9:51:00 AM
This is beautiful Ann. I love the flow of this read and the story it tells. Wonderfully written my friend. Chris.
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Date: 11/25/2008 8:56:00 AM
"I have seen the morning burning golden on the mountain in the sky...and loving him was easier than anything I'll ever do again..." There, a Kristofferson line. Sing it one more time, for the good time! Kath
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Date: 3/30/2015 12:11:00 PM
Haha Kath you are so right,,,not been on here for years and just reading poems I have posted...so funny and interesting reading them...Love Kriss saw him in Bristol..and shook his hand...made my day...xx
Date: 11/25/2008 7:12:00 AM
Great writing, very visual, love the story it tells! :) God bless, Amy
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Date: 11/25/2008 7:02:00 AM
This sounds like a real story about someone who's music, perhaps we have all heard? Nicely done in the poem, Ann. ~ Carrie
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