Tristan Tupper Poet Rhyme

The Song of the Sumicles My Boat

Almost weightlessly you glide across the waves,
with the wind our friend and foe.
Using nature as the power of our ways,
hoping the waves stay low.
The mast cracks and screeches,
when the wind shows her fury.
Then you wish for beaches.
SUMICLES my boat you are anything but dreary.

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Poet Destroyer A January 9, 2016 at 2:00 PM well done. great description. LINDA Tristan Tupper January 9, 2016 at 2:02 PM Thanks Linda.

Skat A January 9, 2016 at 8:04 AM Excellent write, like the comparison of soft and rough waves, to her emotions. Skat Tristan Tupper January 9, 2016 at 1:59 PM Thanks SKAT.

White Sage January 9, 2016 at 2:39 AM beautiful write Tristan... a nice boat there Tristan Tupper January 9, 2016 at 2:50 AM Thank you again for all the support it means a lot!