The Solitary Fish

Curiously you look up,
Seeing the same things everyday
Cooped in a small, pink container
Looking down at the familiar pebbles
You swim in your thoughts
Awaiting another day
Living for yourself and you only
Because it is all you've ever known
And there are giants all around you
They are scary, but exciting
It gives you something to look at
You hardly notice me watching you
Writing of your simple, yet inspiring existence 
Your beautiful, red fins flowing in the water
The plastic palm tree, your only companion
You must get lonely, but what do I know?
The concept of being alone
May be in your brain unknown
I feed you little morsels
Your beady eyes are glued on them
You never complain...
I love that about you, solitary fish
You serve me your light
Upon tonight
So I'll just sit here watching you
Looking up...never once
Asking to be aknowledged...never asking for attention

Just keep swimming, little one
And I will too...for the sun
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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July 13, 2012 at 8:51 AM
Stopping by today to thank you for your kind comments on my writings Laura. I hope to be reading your poetry for many years to come. Thank you for sharing your poetry with us and may you always find the inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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June 30, 2012 at 9:33 PM
This was really touching. I need to be able to do stuff lke this. It's inspirational to me. Need more poets like this.
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