The Sole of Your Feet

So small and loving 
As two little sparrows
Vulnerable and powerful 

The only footprint left on your path 
Everywhere you went 
On this earth 
You are 
There 
You have left 
The sole of your feet 

Aby M.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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John Avatar
August 3, 2022 at 2:35 AM
Lovely thoughts here, Aby. Expressed so quickly, so effectively.
Ray Avatar
August 2, 2022 at 1:11 PM
love the simplicity of how it moves along....great moment caught in a few lines
M'Baye Avatar
August 4, 2022 at 1:02 AM
Thanks a lot Thimothy, it means a lot for me. I'm working on other poems dedicated to our feet, hihi. It's a subject to be explored. I think of it in particular in relation to the trees which have their feet too...
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