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The Soldier

I fought the battle, I lost the war; I never saw the enemy sitting open on the shore I knew that it was over, I saw the fight was done; I was killed by a bullet from another son's gun I laid there bleeding, I yelled a silent scream, "Why was my life over, is this real or just a dream?" I never felt it coming, my body - my buddies now claim; my life has now been ended... I lost - what a damn awful shame! For "World Of War: Vietnam" contest sponsored by Miranda Lambert. By: George Aul

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/26/2011 8:19:00 AM
So glad I found this. Amazing how you the victim are telling the story. Very effective.
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Date: 4/14/2011 2:50:00 AM
It seems to be the product of war - death and destruction. Great writing, George. Best wishes in the contest. Lainie
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Date: 4/13/2011 12:16:00 PM
I am reading such diverse poems here at PoetrySoup. Poet's hearts are bleeding poetry today. That is where the best poetry comes from. It has been my pleasure to read your poetry today George. Continue to write and share it and I will be back to read it. Have a wonderful day and may you find inspiration along the way. Love, Carol
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