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The Solar Eclipse

Across the sky the Sun could see The Moon approach, with nervous glee A longtime coming, an empirical fact Ninety-Nine years to be exact The Sun stood ready, her corona ablaze Moments away from a stellar phase Not a crescent or harvest or even a full She wondered about gravitational pull Now almost upon her, the Moon had a smile “Hello old friend, It’s been a while. I’m just passing through” His face was blotching “Let’s make it quick, the world is watching” Halfway through his celestial arc A slow approach as the sky went dark He braced himself and pursed his lips And just like that came the solar eclipse!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 9/5/2017 3:20:00 PM
Lovely, Fun Eclipse poem. Sounds to have a bit of a "Double Entendre" going on in there. Have you noticed how a poem with a topical title gets lots of reads, I have one called "Moon" not about the eclipse and written long before, but all of a sudden, its my most read poem. Kind regards to you Kitty, loved you poem, Kevin xx
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Kitty Lou
Date: 9/5/2017 3:30:00 PM
thanks for reading, and yes - I did notice that! too funny!
Date: 8/21/2017 11:10:00 PM
I love your poem commemorating the eclipse! It's my favorite of the day.
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Date: 8/21/2017 11:36:00 AM
How clever you are.
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Kitty Lou
Date: 8/21/2017 2:00:00 PM
Thank you!

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