The Solar Eclipse

Across the sky the Sun could see
The Moon approach, with nervous glee
A longtime coming, an empirical fact
Ninety-Nine years to be exact

The Sun stood ready, her corona ablaze
Moments away from a stellar phase
Not a crescent or harvest or even a full
She wondered about gravitational pull

Now almost upon her, the Moon had a smile
“Hello old friend, It’s been a while.
I’m just passing through” His face was blotching
“Let’s make it quick, the world is watching”

Halfway through his celestial arc
A slow approach as the sky went dark
He braced himself and pursed his lips
And just like that came the solar eclipse!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Shaw Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 3:20 PM
Lovely, Fun Eclipse poem. Sounds to have a bit of a "Double Entendre" going on in there. Have you noticed how a poem with a topical title gets lots of reads, I have one called "Moon" not about the eclipse and written long before, but all of a sudden, its my most read poem. Kind regards to you Kitty, loved you poem, Kevin xx
Lou Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 3:30 PM
thanks for reading, and yes - I did notice that! too funny!
Harris Avatar
August 21, 2017 at 11:10 PM
I love your poem commemorating the eclipse! It's my favorite of the day.
Wanter Avatar
August 21, 2017 at 11:36 AM
How clever you are.
Lou Avatar
August 21, 2017 at 2:00 PM
Thank you!
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