The Snowy Mountains Tanka Contest

the snowy mountains
are silent and without life
a yeti appears
i wonder if i am just
imagining company

for Susan’s tanka contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Arowolo Avatar
December 20, 2012 at 4:23 PM
Awesome and nice piece,Jack....Congrats on your well deserved win in this contest...
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 20, 2012 at 5:56 AM
Congratulations Jack, watch out for them yetis they squeeze hard xx
A   Avatar
December 19, 2012 at 8:42 PM
Jack :-) stopping by CONGRATULATE you with your awesome win in Susan's "Tanka " contest... good write~PD
Dietrich Avatar
December 19, 2012 at 4:01 PM
so far, seeing the winners, i can understand exactly how susan was judging them. I really agree with her placements and yours was so cool, jack. I am such a moron, I forgot to even enter my tanka into the contest. I wonder if she would have liked it very much. Luv, andrea
Collins Avatar
December 13, 2012 at 9:57 AM
probably.
Dietrich Avatar
December 9, 2012 at 8:03 PM
Jack, knowing Susan's sense of humor, I think this is a WINNER. I really like it!! and I think you are busy for getting ready for Xmas. I have just been doing cards, packages and little else. I think after this week, it's gonna be smooth sailing after that!! Luv, Andrea
Sivey Avatar
December 9, 2012 at 12:58 PM
Ha ha ha, a Yeti? Seriously this is too funny my friend! I really do enjoy reading this incredibly hilarious poem this afternoon! What a perfect entry into Susan's contest Jack! You will do very well! Great Work!!
Kendrick Avatar
December 9, 2012 at 12:58 PM
I hope just imagination..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Sweetheart Avatar
December 9, 2012 at 8:51 AM
another cool blast of creativity from your pen Jack luv .. good luck in Susam's contest .. awesome ..yeti and al.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 9, 2012 at 7:14 AM
Could be my friend , they never look as good when the alcohol has worn off xx
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