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The Snowy Fields

“Every flower is a soul blossoming in nature” Gerard De Nerval THE SNOWY FIELDS The honeymooners sleigh-shaped bed — a vase. Arrange our starry souls, so sound awake. O lovebird buds, fly free above our place — Embrace the happiness of snow globe shakes. The snowy fields of baby’s breath catch mine. Its strong and downy spread of beauty soft. O Winter glistens in my arms. The sign. . . A million stars of love’s sweet light; the loft. Date written - 10/23/2019 Writing Challenge, October, 2019 - Flower or Flowers - Sponsor, Dear Heart - Wiishkobi Ode

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Date: 11/3/2019 1:14:00 PM
Kim congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this lovely poem!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/3/2019 3:52:00 PM
Thank you, Constance!
Date: 11/1/2019 5:37:00 PM
absolutely charming Kim, many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/1/2019 6:10:00 PM
Thank you, Jan! xx
Date: 11/1/2019 2:46:00 PM
- Congratulations on your beautiful poem, Kim :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/1/2019 4:41:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
Date: 11/1/2019 9:06:00 AM
Kim congrats on your placement!;) lovely poem!;)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/1/2019 10:28:00 AM
Thank you, Brenda! xx
Date: 10/24/2019 3:33:00 PM
Short and sublime. This poem really draws a beautiful picture of winter, warmth, love and comfort. Best wishes for the contest.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/24/2019 9:13:00 PM
Thank you, W.A.!
Date: 10/23/2019 9:45:00 PM
This elevated, elegant piece is ticketed for the winner's circle, methinks. :-) Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/23/2019 9:59:00 PM
Thank you, Gershon!
Date: 10/23/2019 8:14:00 PM
You touched the plateau of beauty with this one. dear poet Kim. gl in the contest.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/23/2019 8:35:00 PM
Thank you, Pixie! :)
Date: 10/23/2019 3:08:00 PM
Oh Nicely Done. Baby's Breath is so lovely and really makes a vase of roses special. Love it. God Bless, JB
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/23/2019 8:36:00 PM
They are a pretty little flower! Thank you, Judy! :)
Date: 10/23/2019 2:43:00 PM
That was beautiful Kim. I just loved "The snowy fields of baby’s breath catch mine." That was gorgeous. Really nice. Best wishes in the contest
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/23/2019 2:45:00 PM
Thank you, Chris! I write mostly in free verse or brevity so these take a lot of mental work. Hugs...Kim

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