Kim Rodrigues Poet Rhyme

The Snowy Fields

“Every flower is a soul blossoming in nature” Gerard De Nerval

THE SNOWY FIELDS

The honeymooners sleigh-shaped bed — a vase.
Arrange our starry souls, so sound awake.

O lovebird buds, fly free above our place —
Embrace the happiness of snow globe shakes.

The snowy fields of baby’s breath catch mine.
Its strong and downy spread of beauty soft.

O Winter glistens in my arms. The sign. . .
A million stars of love’s sweet light; the loft.


Date written - 10/23/2019

Writing Challenge, October, 2019 - Flower or Flowers - 

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Constance La France November 3, 2019 at 1:14 PM Kim congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this lovely poem! Kim Rodrigues November 3, 2019 at 3:52 PM Thank you, Constance!

Jan Allison November 1, 2019 at 5:37 PM absolutely charming Kim, many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx Kim Rodrigues November 1, 2019 at 6:10 PM Thank you, Jan! xx

Anne-Lise Andresen November 1, 2019 at 2:46 PM - Congratulations on your beautiful poem, Kim :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Kim Rodrigues November 1, 2019 at 4:41 PM Thank you, Anne-Lise!

Brenda Chiri November 1, 2019 at 9:06 AM Kim congrats on your placement!;) lovely poem!;) Kim Rodrigues November 1, 2019 at 10:28 AM Thank you, Brenda! xx

W.A. Cholt October 24, 2019 at 3:33 PM Short and sublime. This poem really draws a beautiful picture of winter, warmth, love and comfort. Best wishes for the contest. Kim Rodrigues October 24, 2019 at 9:13 PM Thank you, W.A.!

Gershon Wolf October 23, 2019 at 9:45 PM This elevated, elegant piece is ticketed for the winner's circle, methinks. :-) Gershon Kim Rodrigues October 23, 2019 at 9:59 PM Thank you, Gershon!

Mystic Rose Rose October 23, 2019 at 8:14 PM You touched the plateau of beauty with this one. dear poet Kim. gl in the contest. Kim Rodrigues October 23, 2019 at 8:35 PM Thank you, Pixie! :)

Judy Ball October 23, 2019 at 3:08 PM Oh Nicely Done. Baby's Breath is so lovely and really makes a vase of roses special. Love it. God Bless, JB Kim Rodrigues October 23, 2019 at 8:36 PM They are a pretty little flower! Thank you, Judy! :)

Chris Green October 23, 2019 at 2:43 PM That was beautiful Kim. I just loved "The snowy fields of baby’s breath catch mine." That was gorgeous. Really nice. Best wishes in the contest Kim Rodrigues October 23, 2019 at 2:45 PM Thank you, Chris! I write mostly in free verse or brevity so these take a lot of mental work. Hugs...Kim