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THE SNOW FLAKE What happens to angels tears, as they fall from the Heaven above, into diamonds of ice so are they Transformed, turning, spinning in the atmosphere. Until unique unto themselves, white pieces of Frozen lace, perfections icy miracle, descending From the blue hewed skies of Nirvana. Covering the last leaf of fall, one by one The power flakes glisten beneath the October sunshine. Crystal shells of ice, freeze into water cylinders, Forming sickles of decorations, that hang from Every house and tree. It is truly a winder wonderland, so beautiful That the angels themselves come to behold, What their teardrops have made, as a single Feather falls from wings of grace, it to turns To ice, and is blanketed beneath the freshly fallen snow. 08-04-2014

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Date: 8/19/2014 8:02:00 PM
Beautiful tale of the snow flake. Congratulations, Cherl.
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Date: 8/18/2014 5:24:00 AM
Wonderful write on flakes, Cheryl. congrats
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Date: 8/18/2014 1:23:00 AM
just heavenly, cherl.. applause to you!
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Date: 8/17/2014 10:18:00 PM
Hi Cherl, , Congratulations, in Andrea's sorta Shell, contest:)....Love Linda
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Date: 8/17/2014 7:47:00 PM
Congratulations, Cheri on a beautiful win!!! I enjoyed reading this piece - excellent write! Warmest regards. Pandita
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Date: 8/17/2014 5:33:00 PM
absolutely stunning - a well deserved winner:-) Hugs jan xxx
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Date: 8/17/2014 5:08:00 PM
Ah, my highest placed FLAKE poem in the contest. Your words are just beautiful, Cherl. Congratulations on your well deserved win.
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Date: 8/17/2014 2:06:00 PM
You see beauty in everything, always a pleasure to read your verse. Congrad's on Your win!! Light & Love
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Date: 8/7/2014 4:45:00 PM
Enjoyed your descriptive powers of a winter wonderland. And angels' tears they must be for sure...that feather goes to prove it! a top rating for this beautiful poem, Cherl! // paul
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Date: 8/6/2014 8:04:00 AM
Lovely approach to the theme of flake. good luck in the contest, Cheryl
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Date: 8/6/2014 1:13:00 AM
That is so beautiful Cheryl as Eve said it is like a winter wonderland and gee would I like to see one of them, very well written my dear friend take care...................Vera............
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Date: 8/5/2014 7:42:00 PM
That is terrific!!! so very descriptive, I love it! :)
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