The Snow

The snow doth fall upon my face

with cool spots of icy water that soon melt from the heat of 98 point 6

The snow fills my bird bath 'til it piles up and creates a dome no bird will negotiate

The river, behind my house flows slower as snow and freezing temperatures begin to solidify the water 

And there is my neighbor, struggling to remove the snow from her driveway

I see her breath as each shovelful advances her progress to the street

Within a few moments her driveway is clear as I whisk my snow blower through the 3 foot berm to the open roadway

She says thank you in her soft and bone chilled voice

I call back,"Merry Christmas".
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
January 25, 2012 at 7:23 AM
I wish I had a better understanding on the forms of poetry so I could give you a concise comment on your writing. I will tell you I do love reading poetry. I thank you for sharing yours today I enjoyed reading it Preston. Love, Carol
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January 24, 2012 at 9:37 AM
That was nice !! Enjoyed !!
Hill Avatar
January 24, 2012 at 10:58 AM
Thank you, Debra. :^)
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