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The Snake Or the Egg

blood in quotations you are just like your mother venom still pumping 1.1.2020 Senryu on Mother Poetry Contest Sponsor Jenish Somadas

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/29/2020 6:07:00 AM

I am grinning from stern to stem with this one.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/29/2020 8:02:00 AM

Heh heh ;)))) not everyone had a sweet moma <3 and quite frankly, my sister took after her more than me, for me she taught me how not to be. xomo!

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 1/11/2020 7:06:00 AM

Ouch. Congratulations on your win, Kai

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/10/2020 3:18:00 PM

sounds like my mother in law! GREAT job with this one. Congrats

Funom Makama

Date: 1/10/2020 11:09:00 AM

Delicious lines, your imagery and creativity are royal sisters. Nice reading from the pen of your mind. Happy 2020 and congrats on your win./

Eve Roper

Date: 1/9/2020 6:57:00 PM

Wow! Maureen, I am grateful I am not like my mother. People can be hateful. Congratulations on your win in Jenish' contest. Hugs Eve

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 1/9/2020 10:01:00 PM

I feel the same, which is why that saying slips so sharply under my skin lol ;)))) Thank you Eve, mo Hugs

Jenish Somadas

Date: 1/9/2020 12:22:00 AM

lol.. venom still pumping.. A different one.. Beautifully done.. Congrats on your win..

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 1/9/2020 9:13:00 AM

Thank you so much! Delighted you enjoyed it Jenish! :))) xomo

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/4/2020 10:47:00 PM

I guess the venom doesn't land far from the venomist! So creative, Maureen! ~ Venom-us

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 1/9/2020 9:16:00 AM

I did inherit her wit, I'm not an only child... ;), lol <3

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 1/2/2020 5:57:00 PM

Very intriguing, I like!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 1/3/2020 7:58:00 AM

Thank you Tim, Happy New Year Hugs! xomo

Fj Thomas

Date: 1/2/2020 12:52:00 PM

Oh snap! This one will wake you up! Well done Maureen!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 1/3/2020 7:58:00 AM

Thank you FJ! ;), xomo!

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 1/2/2020 4:41:00 AM

Ouch. Painful and meaningful ...

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 1/3/2020 7:57:00 AM

Thank you Kai. xomo

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/2/2020 3:19:00 AM

Superb Senryu dearest, Maureen. Good luck and Happy New Year. Hugs xxx

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 1/3/2020 7:56:00 AM

Thank you dear sweet D, Happy New Year Hugs and Love, xomo <3

Mark Toney

Date: 1/1/2020 10:48:00 PM

Powerful and thought-provoking! I like it, Maureen. ~Mark

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 1/3/2020 7:54:00 AM

Thank you Mark, xomo

Eric Ashford

Date: 1/1/2020 1:29:00 PM

Wow - strong little muse. Enjoyed Maureen.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 1/3/2020 7:53:00 AM

Thank you Eric, xomo