Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Poet Senryu

The Snake Or the Egg

blood in quotations
                you are just like your mother

                      venom still pumping




1.1.2020

Senryu on Mother Poetry Contest
Sponsor Jenish Somadas

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Caren Krutsinger April 29, 2020 at 6:07 AM I am grinning from stern to stem with this one. Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart April 29, 2020 at 8:02 AM Heh heh ;)))) not everyone had a sweet moma <3 and quite frankly, my sister took after her more than me, for me she taught me how not to be. xomo!

Kai Michael Neumann January 11, 2020 at 7:06 AM Ouch. Congratulations on your win, Kai

Andrea Dietrich January 10, 2020 at 3:18 PM sounds like my mother in law! GREAT job with this one. Congrats

Funom Makama January 10, 2020 at 11:09 AM Delicious lines, your imagery and creativity are royal sisters. Nice reading from the pen of your mind. Happy 2020 and congrats on your win./

Eve Roper January 9, 2020 at 6:57 PM Wow! Maureen, I am grateful I am not like my mother. People can be hateful. Congratulations on your win in Jenish' contest. Hugs Eve Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart January 9, 2020 at 10:01 PM I feel the same, which is why that saying slips so sharply under my skin lol ;)))) Thank you Eve, mo Hugs

Jenish Somadas January 9, 2020 at 12:22 AM lol.. venom still pumping.. A different one.. Beautifully done.. Congrats on your win.. Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart January 9, 2020 at 9:13 AM Thank you so much! Delighted you enjoyed it Jenish! :))) xomo

Gershon Wolf January 4, 2020 at 10:47 PM I guess the venom doesn't land far from the venomist! So creative, Maureen! ~ Venom-us Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart January 9, 2020 at 9:16 AM I did inherit her wit, I'm not an only child... ;), lol <3

Timothy Mcguire January 2, 2020 at 5:57 PM Very intriguing, I like! Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart January 3, 2020 at 7:58 AM Thank you Tim, Happy New Year Hugs! xomo

FJ Thomas January 2, 2020 at 12:52 PM Oh snap! This one will wake you up! Well done Maureen! Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart January 3, 2020 at 7:58 AM Thank you FJ! ;), xomo!

Kai Michael Neumann January 2, 2020 at 4:41 AM Ouch. Painful and meaningful ... Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart January 3, 2020 at 7:57 AM Thank you Kai. xomo

Demetrios Trifiatis January 2, 2020 at 3:19 AM Superb Senryu dearest, Maureen. Good luck and Happy New Year. Hugs xxx Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart January 3, 2020 at 7:56 AM Thank you dear sweet D, Happy New Year Hugs and Love, xomo <3

Mark Toney January 1, 2020 at 10:48 PM Powerful and thought-provoking! I like it, Maureen. ~Mark Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart January 3, 2020 at 7:54 AM Thank you Mark, xomo

Eric Ashford January 1, 2020 at 1:29 PM Wow - strong little muse. Enjoyed Maureen. Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart January 3, 2020 at 7:53 AM Thank you Eric, xomo