The Snake Dances Past Them

The snake dances past them in the air
    Fear frozen in eyes of charming pair
  Hyenas cackle, vultures on high
    streaks of lightning stab the sky

  A night not fit for man or beast
    blood gushing from ancient fountains
  Apparitions looming every place they turn
    O, for creature comforts do they yearn
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Lawless Avatar
August 31, 2023 at 2:08 PM
MOM....Billy left the cage door open again.....Nice one Gershon
Wolf Avatar
August 31, 2023 at 7:27 PM
Ha, ha! There's the John I know... Thanks!!
Lamoureux Avatar
August 31, 2023 at 6:50 AM
Your imagery is haunting. You haven’t lost your touch.
Wolf Avatar
August 31, 2023 at 7:27 PM
Yes, I've hit my thumb with a hammer 16 times this month already. ~ Thumbs 'down'
Hawkins Avatar
August 30, 2023 at 11:32 PM
This is a B....Y good couplet.
Faulkner Avatar
August 30, 2023 at 9:18 PM
A sneak peak of the upcoming season of ghosts and goblins, I see! Very creepily done :)
Wolf Avatar
August 31, 2023 at 7:26 PM
Ha, ha! Actually hadn't thought of Oct. 31 at all. But re-reading this one, you are certainly right! Thanks, gw
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