The Snake


Watch out for that certain snake
The person that slithers between moods
The person who takes personal issues,
using them as ammunition against others
Then, around the bend fake niceness ensues
It's as if the striking, painful words never happened
Back and forth it can go, as he or she hides from truth
This snake in the grass knows just where to go
Watch out for this snake, the motives it may have,
as this one builds plans to attack, swiftly, suddenly
It escapes accountability, leaving a path in the sand,
one with grains of salt, leaving an imprint on your soul

Heidi Sands

3/10/25

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Date: 4/1/2025 7:48:00 AM
There are indeed plenty of snakes around, good one Heidi
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Heidi Sands
Date: 4/1/2025 7:06:00 PM
True Terry. Thank you for your comment :)
Date: 3/13/2025 2:51:00 PM
Hello Heidi, more than the odd grain of truth Here in my estimation.' I've seen quite a few Slitherers ss..sliding around in my time hmm Drainstream media has them by the ton.' Btw And guess what.' A slanted show is aired and People who you think have learned.? Still get Wrapped in those cuddly coils, why am i surprised.? All the best.'
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/13/2025 3:40:00 PM
True Joe. It is unbelievable. Thank you for commenting :)
Date: 3/13/2025 2:31:00 PM
My word, such a person is truly venomous to others in their path
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/13/2025 3:39:00 PM
You have that right Joseph. Thank you for your visit and comment :)
Date: 3/11/2025 7:07:00 PM
The snake hasn't changed since its days in the Garden of Eden, has it?! Amazing. :) gw
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/11/2025 7:11:00 PM
It is truly around. Thank you for your visits and comments :)
Date: 3/11/2025 2:58:00 PM
Too many snakes in the grass. Some can be well camouflaged.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/11/2025 5:13:00 PM
Very true Jerry. Thank you :)
Date: 3/11/2025 2:44:00 AM
Far too many snakes are around, and they change their skin as it pleases them. Lovely poem.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/11/2025 5:16:00 AM
Yes . You are right Victor. Thank you :)
Date: 3/10/2025 5:38:00 PM
Good one Heidi. Snakes are everywhere unfortunately. They speak with forked tongues.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/10/2025 10:02:00 PM
Yew true Okiver. Thank you :)
Date: 3/10/2025 1:50:00 PM
Sounds like a sinister, slinky sort. Have a great day Heidi
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/10/2025 4:25:00 PM
Thank you Tom. I hope you have a good evening :)
Date: 3/10/2025 1:21:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "The Snake" write. So True... People sure can be snakes, so evil. Have a fun/blessed day as you write away..........
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/10/2025 1:25:00 PM
Thank you Paula. Yes , they sure can. Blessings :)
Date: 3/10/2025 1:13:00 PM
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