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The Smile

The soles of his feet were gnarled, cracked, calloused shreds of flesh But tough in their stance as he sauntered and shuffled On two broken knees that never mended, clicking but muffled Walking like a misplaced puppet on the master's string While begging for his next meal, he would stand up and sing Barely able to hold his 'cup of good fortune' for passersby to fill and refresh His nerve damaged hands scarred, dirt ridden and unkempt Like a pair of lovesome cudgels reaching to battle the stars Barely able to grasp his "cup of fortune" or tote his life-in-a-bag His crooked shoulders and elbows bowed and bent Had lost their motility and strength years ago, his pain prolonging He was pieced together like his spent double breasted coat of midnight blue His body, his being was held together like a hand sewn quilt on worn shoes Like an old dog that had been lost for so long that he had forgotten His way home, he strayed wandering and wondering where and why So his journey languished to simply eat or sleep and sing or get high His most striking quality, his tenderness of heart,emanated from his smile Manifesting his love brilliantly placed in the eyes of others who would ask why? He imbued this purity of sweet sadness and gratitude, with humility This child of a lesser God possessed the greatest gift of all - tranquility He had found his peace April 15, 2020

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Date: 6/13/2020 8:55:00 PM
Lonna, your tenderness of heart is on full display in this compassionate poem. Your poetic graces are well served as you compare your subject to a spent coat and a hand sewn quilt. You portray him in rough yet sympathetic tones that help draw the reader in to sharing your sensitivity. Sad in the whole, but a positive conclusion that he had found his peace. Beautiful and heartrending at the same time. Hugs ~ John
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 6/14/2020 8:34:00 PM
Thank you for the warmth of your message John. You are indeed a great and heartfelt critic. Hope you and yours are well, safe and happy. Hugs back at you!
Date: 4/23/2020 6:52:00 AM
"Like an old dog that had been lost for so long that he had forgotten His way home, "so sad, and so true in more times than I would ever want to think about. The resigning feeling of his fate resonated in this one; also true.
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 4/25/2020 10:13:00 PM
Caren, cannot tell you how happy you make me with your appreciation!
Date: 4/19/2020 6:18:00 AM
Congratulations! Your writing is truly a sad and eloquent poem. It is in the best of times and probably more so now in the hardest of times that people will fall through the cracks of society. What a beautiful reminder that they are people too.
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 4/19/2020 9:45:00 AM
Thank you JC! Indeed they are, and indeed needs others help, when they are ready for it. Lonna
Date: 4/18/2020 8:12:00 PM
Hi, Lonna. Congrats on your well-deserved win. This poem took me back 50 years to the streets of Chicago. Thanks for sharing.
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 4/18/2020 9:16:00 PM
I too have witnessed people in these life positions, befriended them, fed them, have them some human kindness. They are remarkable! Thank you for sharing. Lonna
Date: 4/15/2020 10:59:00 PM
So sad in many ways, it breaks my heart. But, you take us to resolution. This poem has such vivd imagery. Good luck in the cotest.
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 4/22/2020 7:43:00 PM
Thank you Sam. These human beings have always touched my heart. Lonna
Date: 4/15/2020 7:10:00 PM
Wonderful imagery...on a rugged journey to a sunset of smiles...Nice one
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 4/22/2020 7:43:00 PM
Thanks Arturo. Loved your conclusion - its beautiful. Lonna

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