The Smile

The soles of his feet were gnarled, cracked, calloused shreds of flesh
But tough in their stance as he sauntered and shuffled
On two broken knees that never mended, clicking but muffled
Walking like a misplaced puppet on the master's string
While begging for his next meal, he would stand up and sing
Barely able to hold his 'cup of good fortune' for passersby to fill and refresh

His nerve damaged hands scarred, dirt ridden and unkempt
Like a pair of lovesome cudgels reaching to battle the stars
Barely able to grasp his "cup of fortune" or tote his life-in-a-bag
His crooked shoulders and elbows bowed and bent
Had lost their motility and strength years ago, his pain prolonging
He was pieced together like his spent double breasted coat of midnight blue
His body, his being was held together like a hand sewn quilt on worn shoes

Like an old dog that had been lost for so long that he had forgotten
His way home, he strayed wandering and wondering where and why
So his journey languished to simply eat or sleep and sing or get high
His most striking quality, his tenderness of heart,emanated from his smile
Manifesting his love brilliantly placed in the eyes of others who would ask why?
He imbued this purity of sweet sadness and gratitude, with humility
This child of a lesser God possessed the greatest gift of all - tranquility
He had found his peace

April 15, 2020

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 6/13/2020 8:55:00 PM
Lonna, your tenderness of heart is on full display in this compassionate poem. Your poetic graces are well served as you compare your subject to a spent coat and a hand sewn quilt. You portray him in rough yet sympathetic tones that help draw the reader in to sharing your sensitivity. Sad in the whole, but a positive conclusion that he had found his peace. Beautiful and heartrending at the same time. Hugs ~ John
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 6/14/2020 8:34:00 PM
Thank you for the warmth of your message John. You are indeed a great and heartfelt critic. Hope you and yours are well, safe and happy. Hugs back at you!
Date: 4/23/2020 6:52:00 AM
"Like an old dog that had been lost for so long that he had forgotten His way home, "so sad, and so true in more times than I would ever want to think about. The resigning feeling of his fate resonated in this one; also true.
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 4/25/2020 10:13:00 PM
Caren, cannot tell you how happy you make me with your appreciation!
Date: 4/19/2020 6:18:00 AM
Congratulations! Your writing is truly a sad and eloquent poem. It is in the best of times and probably more so now in the hardest of times that people will fall through the cracks of society. What a beautiful reminder that they are people too.
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Date: 4/19/2020 9:45:00 AM
Thank you JC! Indeed they are, and indeed needs others help, when they are ready for it. Lonna
Date: 4/18/2020 8:12:00 PM
Hi, Lonna. Congrats on your well-deserved win. This poem took me back 50 years to the streets of Chicago. Thanks for sharing.
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 4/18/2020 9:16:00 PM
I too have witnessed people in these life positions, befriended them, fed them, have them some human kindness. They are remarkable! Thank you for sharing. Lonna
Date: 4/15/2020 10:59:00 PM
So sad in many ways, it breaks my heart. But, you take us to resolution. This poem has such vivd imagery. Good luck in the cotest.
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 4/22/2020 7:43:00 PM
Thank you Sam. These human beings have always touched my heart. Lonna
Date: 4/15/2020 7:10:00 PM
Wonderful imagery...on a rugged journey to a sunset of smiles...Nice one
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Date: 4/22/2020 7:43:00 PM
Thanks Arturo. Loved your conclusion - its beautiful. Lonna
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