The Smell of Touch

when i smell the touch blood i smell fear in ur heart
when i smell the touch taste  i smell crying in ur heart
when i smell the touch food  i smell passion in ur heart
when i smell the touch i smell ever thing
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Bolton Avatar
December 18, 2009 at 9:43 AM
Very good- I love the small use of words to convey so much
Chuluun Avatar
November 11, 2009 at 7:46 AM
i love this... mingling the senses evoke so much
Brown Avatar
November 11, 2009 at 4:03 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Kavasha. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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