Notes About The Poem

The Slice of Life

Life is as precious
As a rose, so beautiful!
And the slice of life
Tastes sweeter than
A cherry so sweet.
In the midst of life,
Myriads of lemons squeezed 
Make lemonade,
Keeping us all infinitely thirsty. 
God willing, we'll keep on
Quenching that thirst
For years and years to come.
In the final hour
of our inevitable demise,
May we all have the courage
To face it without fear.
God willing, we'll peacefully
Fade out as we sleep
With Morpheus cooing
A lullaby for eternal slumber
Into our ears.
May melancholy dirge 
Be overshadowed
By uplifting music 
At my own funeral. I'd prefer
Mine more celebratory than somber!
Norman Greenbaum's
"Spirit In The Sky"
Closing the ceremony.
Boy, what a send off that'll be!


A Poem About DEATH Poetry Contest/Winner(7th Place)
Sponsored by Broken Wings
Theme: The Midst of Life
Date written and posted:05/16/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Justice Ndubuisi Avatar
July 4, 2018 at 1:35 AM
Wow! "For life is too beautiful. And the slice of life Tastes sweeter than a cherry so sweet" I concur brother. Nice read. Keep writing.
Ibeh Avatar
July 4, 2018 at 8:51 AM
Thank you for the support, Chime!:-)
Gauthier Avatar
June 2, 2018 at 9:19 PM
Congrats on your win, Edward. Well done.
Ibeh Avatar
June 2, 2018 at 9:28 PM
Thank you very much, Line!:-)
Dietrich Avatar
May 20, 2018 at 5:06 PM
wow, I LOVE how you did the theme. A well deserved win. I hope this placed high. Congratulations.
Ibeh Avatar
May 20, 2018 at 5:29 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea! You're very kind:-) It placed 7th place, which was good enough for me. Thanks again!*hugs*
La France Avatar
May 19, 2018 at 10:54 PM
Edward, congratulations on your win in my contest with this well done write ~
Ibeh Avatar
May 20, 2018 at 8:13 AM
Thanks again, Broken Wings. Much obliged.
Gentry Avatar
May 19, 2018 at 12:16 PM
Congratulations on your win with this unique poem about death. Well done.
Ibeh Avatar
May 20, 2018 at 8:14 AM
Thank you so much, Susan!
Allison Avatar
May 18, 2018 at 2:49 PM
Many congrats on your win Edward - what an awesome thought provoking quote you found to accompany your poem:-) hugs jan xx
Ibeh Avatar
May 18, 2018 at 3:03 PM
Many many thanks for the wonderful, kind words, Jan!;-)
Sands Avatar
May 18, 2018 at 1:48 PM
Congratulations for your win Edward :)
Ibeh Avatar
May 18, 2018 at 2:25 PM
Many thanks, Heidi!:-) God bless...
Andresen Avatar
May 18, 2018 at 12:39 PM
- Congratulations on your 7th place in the contest, Edward - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ibeh Avatar
May 18, 2018 at 2:23 PM
I greatly appreciate your wonderful support. Thank you so much, Anne-Lise!
Onclaud Avatar
May 18, 2018 at 12:11 AM
ohh, edward, yes, this comment is for you!.. huggs
Ibeh Avatar
May 18, 2018 at 6:19 AM
Thanks again, Nette! Have a blessed day...
Onclaud Avatar
May 17, 2018 at 11:25 AM
Edward, for now, let us relish each moment , create new adventures, seek the god in you!... Inspiring, lovely poem !
Ibeh Avatar
May 18, 2018 at 6:17 AM
Thank you so very much, Nette:-) I appreciate it!
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