The Sky's the Limit

fearing a future
measured merely by inches
dare he dream of flight

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 5/20/2010 3:41:00 PM
Reminds me of swinging out from a cliff, if the rope broke, this would be my fervent dream. Great job, I love it.
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Date: 5/15/2010 12:47:00 PM
well done Joyce,enjoyed, have anice one,..p.d.
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Date: 5/1/2010 8:25:00 PM
Compelling Haiku. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 4/29/2010 6:58:00 AM
Very interesting haiku, Joyce :)
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Date: 4/27/2010 9:36:00 AM
Nicely done.
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