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The Skylark

Ayoo, ayooeh Above the blue day A sound of wings, a shudder Song of currents swell Thousand moons have fell Into these many waters Ayoo, ayooai Sky bird says goodbye To the youthful lily white Grass of many blades Sky of many shades Goodbye, whispers he, goodnight -For Dr. Mehta's The Alouetee contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/11/2015 4:55:00 PM
What an enchanting write about the skylark. I can see why it placed in the contest!
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Date: 8/23/2014 1:11:00 PM
oh this is so nice and the way you showed their sound. Great job, and congrats.
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Date: 8/23/2014 8:33:00 AM
I really enjoyed your entry Jeremy. was a pleasure to read, grats on your win ;)
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Date: 8/22/2014 6:50:00 PM
Jeremy, this is one of my favorites in this contest. In my opinion, worthy of a higher placement. Love "a shudder song of current swell." Congratulations.
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Date: 8/22/2014 6:18:00 AM
Thanks for the entry and my congrats on your win in my contest, Jeremy
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Date: 8/17/2014 7:03:00 PM
I love your entry in to the contest. It's very original.
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Date: 8/15/2014 4:04:00 AM
- Jeremy, this is really beautifully written (7 !!!) - I hope it will win - good luck! - Have a nice day, thanks for visiting my poem. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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