The Sky Smiles
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Elemental
Created by Charles Messina. This form consists of 7 lines with 7 syllables in each line. And a rhyme pattern of AABBCCA. The first and last lines must be the same. And an "Elemental" must pertain to all 3 elements- (earth, water, and sky).
Water cascades down the falls
untethered from protocols.
And gouging out river beds
deposits silt as it spreads.
The sky smiles with a rainbow
and in the mist far below,
water cascades down the falls.
(Elemental)
7/09/2021
Copyright © Emile Pinet | Year Posted 2021
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