Emile Pinet Poet Verse

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Elemental
Created by Charles Messina. This form consists of 7 lines with 7 syllables in each line. And a rhyme pattern of AABBCCA.  The first and last lines must be the same. And an "Elemental" must pertain to all 3 elements- (earth, water, and sky). 

 

The Sky Smiles

Water cascades down the falls
untethered from protocols.
And gouging out river beds
deposits silt as it spreads.
The sky smiles with a rainbow
and in the mist far below,
water cascades down the falls.


(Elemental)


7/09/2021

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Eve Roper July 10, 2021 at 9:12 PM Love the imagery in this beautiful scenery; good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve Emile Pinet July 11, 2021 at 7:14 AM Thanks, Eve, as always, your comments are appreciated, my friend, Emile.

Jan Allison July 9, 2021 at 2:31 PM beautifully penned rhyme and the picture is perfect:-) hugs Jan xx Emile Pinet July 9, 2021 at 2:38 PM Thanks so much, Jan, I appreciate your thoughtful comments my friend, Emile.

David Mchattie July 9, 2021 at 1:49 PM Very creative. A tricky form of poetry. Well penned my friend. Stay well. Emile Pinet July 9, 2021 at 1:52 PM Thanks, David, as always, your comments are appreciated, my friend, Emile.