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The Sky Smiles

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Elemental
Created by Charles Messina. This form consists of 7 lines with 7 syllables in each line. And a rhyme pattern of AABBCCA.  The first and last lines must be the same. And an "Elemental" must pertain to all 3 elements- (earth, water, and sky). 

 

Water cascades down the falls untethered from protocols. And gouging out river beds deposits silt as it spreads. The sky smiles with a rainbow and in the mist far below, water cascades down the falls. (Elemental) 7/09/2021

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Eve Roper
Date: 7/10/2021 9:12:00 PM
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Love the imagery in this beautiful scenery; good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/11/2021 7:14:00 AM
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Thanks, Eve, as always, your comments are appreciated, my friend, Emile.
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/9/2021 2:31:00 PM
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beautifully penned rhyme and the picture is perfect:-) hugs Jan xx
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/9/2021 2:38:00 PM
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Thanks so much, Jan, I appreciate your thoughtful comments my friend, Emile.
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David Mchattie
Date: 7/9/2021 1:49:00 PM
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Very creative. A tricky form of poetry. Well penned my friend. Stay well.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/9/2021 1:52:00 PM
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Thanks, David, as always, your comments are appreciated, my friend, Emile.

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