This poem about experiencing the light is my first simple Rondeau. It has been modernized with the use of brackets.
The Sky Shines (through my unconscious, aligned). The sky shines deep within my awakened mind. Bright particles beam through my open thoughts; Clairvoyance shows the path that I have sought. While walking, dreams are left so far behind! I'm weaving a gossamer veil that I'll bind With all the rainbow colors now combined. This is the path that dreamers long have sought. The sky shines. Don't be afraid of these sweet faery signs. You are a brilliant light that underlines The wild enchantment of a magic knot That you might see in my paper's ink blot! Let your mind be bright, free, and unconfined. The sky shines!
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