The Sky In July

Gazing at July sky glow - Dull drowsy day to pass, Mere musing in a meadow - Lazy, lounging on grass. July 2, 2022

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/17/2022 11:47:00 AM

i really like your poem but could not fathom a dull day with glow in the sky. Awesome rhymes. Thanks for supporting my contest, and congrats to you.

Gary Radice

Date: 7/10/2022 2:08:00 AM

So much said in four simple lines Margarita, so much described. I can sense a calm silence emanating from your words. Cheers - Gary

John Gondolf

Date: 7/3/2022 8:51:00 AM

You paint a beautiful picture of a lazy summer day my friend. It reminds me of the song "Turn-Down Day" by the Cyrkle which was released back in the 60's. Hope all is well up north. Hugs, John

Margarita Lillico
Date: 7/3/2022 10:24:00 AM

Thanks, John, the sky offers calm and cool that earthy aura lacks at times. M.