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The Sky Cries

(Haiku Series) The sky cries tears now Loud thunder rumbles the ground The storm is at hand Light electrified A streak on the horizon Fear sparks in man's hearts Danger dances strong In the voice of the wind's song Singing its fury Trees bend, leaves rattle The branches weak are scattered The storm is going The sky has brightened The dim, gray, dark, sky no more The aftermath shows So passes a day Cherish, no matter how bleak A new season's peak

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The Situation

Date: 9/30/2013 7:15:00 AM

I saw "sadly" in your comment. Some races are enslaved others disposed. We wonder what God is doing. A slave brought me here. I do not sorrow for that. That slave is in heaven never to be enslaved again. While God tries to make heaven on earth. What the real cost of the life we now live is not measured in dollars but lives. This torture we endure we endure for posterity. To give them something we never had.

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 9/27/2013 4:13:00 PM

heartfelt beautiful piece

Johnny Rhinem

Date: 9/27/2013 2:13:00 PM

In this world tis truly hard as to cherish but another day, sweet precious Lucinda ~ To be absolutely honest about it all and as for this fear ? Only the blind would hold such be this; actually ~ But I do love how in the ending verse comes about as Yes no matter how bleak the gray grim day may somehow seem ? A new season most assuredly shall peak * Thank you for your kind visit; gets myself through another day ~ Love, John

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/26/2013 9:59:00 PM

As in life, some good coming from the storms. A nice flow of poetry.

Don Johnson

Date: 9/26/2013 6:42:00 PM

the storm passes as all will come to pass babe....enjoy the sweeter side of the cruel world ....loves ya bubba lu...