The Sky

The sky is above
not down
but people can't get it why they can't find what's out there
and the sky is just a bit of light
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Henderson Avatar
February 2, 2016 at 3:53 PM
Had to read it a few times, but yea I see a bit of light. Peace and blessings my friend.
Fields Avatar
February 2, 2016 at 4:07 PM
you should read my other one P.S. can you saywhich one you like best
Henderson Avatar
February 2, 2016 at 4:03 PM
Your welcome and keep writing!
Fields Avatar
February 2, 2016 at 3:55 PM
thanks you
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