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The Sky

The whole sky is white No blueness is showing Snowflakes are falling Spreading to the ground Bare trees are coated With the warmth of snow Bushes are covered With patches of snow The Evergreen trees Decorated wit whiteness The wooden fences Look brighter with snow Sidewalks are deepened As the snow falling The streets packed with snow Time for the snow plough

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Zyrool Gifford

Date: 3/5/2024 9:01:00 AM

Wonderfully done.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/5/2024 10:19:00 AM

Hello Gifford, It is so nice to meet you. thank you for this lovely comment. Have a wonderful day. /Darlene/

Christina Bowring

Date: 2/1/2024 7:56:00 AM

This is a lovely poem dear Darlene full of wonderful imagery. You have described it so well that it’s easy to picture the snowy scene. Love the lines, ‘ bare trees are coated with the warmth of snow’. It gives a wonderful image of them wrapped in coats of white to cover their bareness. Really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing. Hugs to you xx

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/1/2024 11:10:00 AM

Hello Christina, Thank you for this wonderful comment. I am glad that you can see the image in my poem. Your welcome my friend. Hugs. xx/Darlene/

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/30/2024 10:16:00 AM

Oh I love to read, see, or hear about snow, as we maybe see it once in a decade. if we are lucky! Beautiful write. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/1/2024 11:16:00 AM

Hello Jennifer, Thank you Jennifer. It is goods to see you again. Thank you for this wonderful comment. I would send you snow, but it would melt. Hugs. &nblessings my friend. /Darlene/

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

Date: 1/29/2024 3:33:00 PM

Happy you shoud be. Sniw is becoming a miracle. Snow sholud happens in winter. That's a blessing of God my dear. That's what everyone shoud have. Nice your penning. Beauty everywhere. Love/María

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/1/2024 11:21:00 AM

Helllo Maria, it is nice to see you Maria. Yes snow should happen in winter. In December we hardly had snow. Our Christmas was green. No snow fell. Then we had snow for a while. Now it is spring thaw. the snow is melting. Patches of dark brown grass showing now. Love, /Darlene/

Jim Slaughter

Date: 1/28/2024 10:50:00 AM

Love this, Darlene...especially as we've had a few days like this here, recently. No snow ploughs needed, however.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/28/2024 3:53:00 PM

Hello Jim, you were lucky not to have the snow plough. They come in the early morning to clear the streets. Before the squirrels are up. Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/

Hiya Sharma

Date: 1/28/2024 5:57:00 AM

Oh, this is such a beautiful and descriptive poem, expressing the imagery about the warmth of snowy scenes, so gorgeously.. You've wonderfully crafted the wordplay here throughout & painted a unique ambience for the reader.. Especially this poem is like a blanket of wintry atmosphere and drapes a cloak of snow upon the universe, in my imagination.. Nicely done! Sending best wishes & light to you..

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/28/2024 3:57:00 PM

Hello Hiya, Hiya thank you for this wonderful comment. Winter shows its beauty with the fallen snow. Winter brightens a dull day with white ness. Enjoy your evening my frienjd. /Darlene/

Mulu Magdalinos

Date: 1/27/2024 4:48:00 AM

Hello Darlene,you are welcome. Have a blessed weekend

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/27/2024 11:47:00 AM

Hello Mulu, Than you M ulu, the same to you. Blessings my friend. /Darlene/

Mulu Magdalinos

Date: 1/26/2024 6:01:00 AM

Hello Darlene, a beautiful poem!i love it! Have a beautifu da!l

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/26/2024 9:59:00 AM

Hello Mulu, Thank you Mulu, that sasme to you. blessings my friend./Darlene/

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/25/2024 1:54:00 PM

Oh I love the sights in this poem. It is beautiful. I can see it so clearly . A Fave for me. Hugs :)

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/25/2024 3:33:00 PM

Hello Heidi, Oh ! Heidi thank you for the fav. Hugs. /Darlene/

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/25/2024 12:50:00 PM

i really liked that contrast of saying warmth of snow. on some snowy days it can actually feel warmer. Beautiful poem.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/25/2024 3:32:00 PM

Hello Andrea, Yes it can feel warm on a snowy day. Thank you for the lovely comment. Hugs. /Darlene/

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 1/21/2024 4:00:00 PM

Hello Darlene De Beaulieu :-) Very nice read indeed!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/22/2024 12:04:00 PM

Hello Abdullah, Thank you for the lovely comment. Blessings my friend./Darlene/

Jan Allison

Date: 1/21/2024 2:57:00 PM

brrr i feel chilled reading your wintery poem Darlene, we had snow and ice last week now we have severe storms, hugs jan xx

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/22/2024 12:07:00 PM

Hello Jan, Brryes it is cold here. It is lightly snowing now. I sense you will be busy shoveling the snow. Hugs. /Darlene/

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 1/21/2024 8:19:00 AM

a lovely and descriptive poem, Darlene. Here in Texas our winter has been gloomy, no blue skies in sight...just gray clouds, harsh winds, and extreme cold--we're not accustomed to such severe temps...but thankfully no snow or black ice. Enjoyed your poem...think spring, Sara

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/21/2024 10:07:00 AM

Hello Sara, oh I think of spring every day. It snowed last night a little. Today it is cold. December was a warmer month. It is gloomy here to. No sun here again today. Hugs. /Darlene/

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 1/20/2024 5:44:00 PM

We have been brutalized by cold and wind but fortunately little snow. But I think that will change quickly on Monday. A wonderful poem, my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/21/2024 4:55:00 AM

Hello Jerry, Oh those winds. It does sound like the winter storm is coming soon your way. Thank you for the wonderful comment my friend. Enjoy your day. /Darlene/

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 1/20/2024 5:13:00 PM

Dear Darlene, this paints a serene winter scene, capturing the enchantment of a world blanketed in snow. From bare trees adorned with warmth to evergreens decorated in whiteness, your vivid descriptions evoke a tranquil beauty. The imagery of snowflakes falling and the streets filled with snow creates a visual poetry that transports us to the hushed magic of a snowy day. Your poem is a delightful celebration of winter's quiet charm. I love it! - Blessings, Daniel

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/21/2024 5:01:00 AM

Hello Daniel, oh thank you for the love.ly comment. It has been very cold here. Too cold to go anywhere. When it snows like this it takes the snow ploughs longer to clear the streets. some people have a hard time to clear their driveways. in the cold. blessings my friend. /Darlene/

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/20/2024 2:50:00 PM

I bet it looks an amazing sight Darlene.. Big storm heading for the uk tomorrow, heavy rain and 80mph winds, Im staying indoors. Tom

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/20/2024 3:17:00 PM

Hello tom, oh Tom i do not blame you. I wlould not want to go out in wqeather like that. Enjoy your evening. Darlene/

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/20/2024 1:01:00 PM

Bravo, Darlene! I derive immense pleasure from your poetic verses capturing the ethereal essence of a sky devoid of any azure hue, while also vividly depicting streets teeming with a blanket of snow. It is now opportune for the snow plow to commence its duty.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/20/2024 3:21:00 PM

Hello Sotto, Yes it is. That will happen later to night. Enjoy your day my friend. Thank you for the .lovely comment. /Darlene/

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/20/2024 12:35:00 PM

- I have been shoveling snow for a week ... the snow plow has been on the roads day and night ... huge amounts of snow have fallen ... this afternoon plus degrees and rain ... a lot has already melted ... it comes and goes ... but it's beautiful, Darlene - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/20/2024 3:26:00 PM

Hello Sunshine Smile, Your lucky the snow melted. Here the snow is getting higher. The snow ploughs will come later. In December we hardly had any snow. Nolw too much. Enjoy hyour even ing . Hugs. /Darlene/