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The Sky

The whole sky is white
  No blueness is showing
  Snowflakes are falling
  Spreading to the ground

  Bare trees are coated
  With the warmth of snow
  Bushes are covered
  With patches of snow
  
  The Evergreen trees 
  Decorated wit  whiteness
  The wooden fences
  Look brighter with snow

  Sidewalks are deepened 
  As the snow falling
  The streets packed with snow
  Time for the snow plough

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Zyrool Gifford

March 5, 2024 at 9:01 AM

Wonderfully done.

Darlene De Beaulieu

March 5, 2024 at 10:19 AM

Hello Gifford, It is so nice to meet you. thank you for this lovely comment. Have a wonderful day. /Darlene/

Christina Bowring

February 1, 2024 at 7:56 AM

This is a lovely poem dear Darlene full of wonderful imagery. You have described it so well that it’s easy to picture the snowy scene. Love the lines, ‘ bare trees are coated with the warmth of snow’. It gives a wonderful image of them wrapped in coats of white to cover their bareness. Really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing. Hugs to you xx

Darlene De Beaulieu

February 1, 2024 at 11:10 AM

Hello Christina, Thank you for this wonderful comment. I am glad that you can see the image in my poem. Your welcome my friend. Hugs. xx/Darlene/

Jennifer Proxenos

January 30, 2024 at 10:16 AM

Oh I love to read, see, or hear about snow, as we maybe see it once in a decade. if we are lucky! Beautiful write. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Darlene De Beaulieu

February 1, 2024 at 11:16 AM

Hello Jennifer, Thank you Jennifer. It is goods to see you again. Thank you for this wonderful comment. I would send you snow, but it would melt. Hugs. &nblessings my friend. /Darlene/

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

January 29, 2024 at 3:33 PM

Happy you shoud be. Sniw is becoming a miracle. Snow sholud happens in winter. That's a blessing of God my dear. That's what everyone shoud have. Nice your penning. Beauty everywhere. Love/María

Darlene De Beaulieu

February 1, 2024 at 11:21 AM

Helllo Maria, it is nice to see you Maria. Yes snow should happen in winter. In December we hardly had snow. Our Christmas was green. No snow fell. Then we had snow for a while. Now it is spring thaw. the snow is melting. Patches of dark brown grass showing now. Love, /Darlene/

Jim Slaughter

January 28, 2024 at 10:50 AM

Love this, Darlene...especially as we've had a few days like this here, recently. No snow ploughs needed, however.

Darlene De Beaulieu

January 28, 2024 at 3:53 PM

Hello Jim, you were lucky not to have the snow plough. They come in the early morning to clear the streets. Before the squirrels are up. Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/

Hiya Sharma

January 28, 2024 at 5:57 AM

Oh, this is such a beautiful and descriptive poem, expressing the imagery about the warmth of snowy scenes, so gorgeously.. You've wonderfully crafted the wordplay here throughout & painted a unique ambience for the reader.. Especially this poem is like a blanket of wintry atmosphere and drapes a cloak of snow upon the universe, in my imagination.. Nicely done! Sending best wishes & light to you..

Darlene De Beaulieu

January 28, 2024 at 3:57 PM

Hello Hiya, Hiya thank you for this wonderful comment. Winter shows its beauty with the fallen snow. Winter brightens a dull day with white ness. Enjoy your evening my frienjd. /Darlene/

Mulu Magdalinos

January 27, 2024 at 4:48 AM

Hello Darlene,you are welcome. Have a blessed weekend

Darlene De Beaulieu

January 27, 2024 at 11:47 AM

Hello Mulu, Than you M ulu, the same to you. Blessings my friend. /Darlene/

Mulu Magdalinos

January 26, 2024 at 6:01 AM

Hello Darlene, a beautiful poem!i love it! Have a beautifu da!l

Darlene De Beaulieu

January 26, 2024 at 9:59 AM

Hello Mulu, Thank you Mulu, that sasme to you. blessings my friend./Darlene/

Heidi Sands

January 25, 2024 at 1:54 PM

Oh I love the sights in this poem. It is beautiful. I can see it so clearly . A Fave for me. Hugs :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

January 25, 2024 at 3:33 PM

Hello Heidi, Oh ! Heidi thank you for the fav. Hugs. /Darlene/

Andrea Dietrich

January 25, 2024 at 12:50 PM

i really liked that contrast of saying warmth of snow. on some snowy days it can actually feel warmer. Beautiful poem.

Darlene De Beaulieu

January 25, 2024 at 3:32 PM

Hello Andrea, Yes it can feel warm on a snowy day. Thank you for the lovely comment. Hugs. /Darlene/

Abdullah Alhemaidy

January 21, 2024 at 4:00 PM

Hello Darlene De Beaulieu :-) Very nice read indeed!

Darlene De Beaulieu

January 22, 2024 at 12:04 PM

Hello Abdullah, Thank you for the lovely comment. Blessings my friend./Darlene/

Jan Allison

January 21, 2024 at 2:57 PM

brrr i feel chilled reading your wintery poem Darlene, we had snow and ice last week now we have severe storms, hugs jan xx

Darlene De Beaulieu

January 22, 2024 at 12:07 PM

Hello Jan, Brryes it is cold here. It is lightly snowing now. I sense you will be busy shoveling the snow. Hugs. /Darlene/

Jerry Brotherton

January 20, 2024 at 5:44 PM

We have been brutalized by cold and wind but fortunately little snow. But I think that will change quickly on Monday. A wonderful poem, my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu

January 21, 2024 at 4:55 AM

Hello Jerry, Oh those winds. It does sound like the winter storm is coming soon your way. Thank you for the wonderful comment my friend. Enjoy your day. /Darlene/

Daniel Henry Rodgers

January 20, 2024 at 5:13 PM

Dear Darlene, this paints a serene winter scene, capturing the enchantment of a world blanketed in snow. From bare trees adorned with warmth to evergreens decorated in whiteness, your vivid descriptions evoke a tranquil beauty. The imagery of snowflakes falling and the streets filled with snow creates a visual poetry that transports us to the hushed magic of a snowy day. Your poem is a delightful celebration of winter's quiet charm. I love it! - Blessings, Daniel

Darlene De Beaulieu

January 21, 2024 at 5:01 AM

Hello Daniel, oh thank you for the love.ly comment. It has been very cold here. Too cold to go anywhere. When it snows like this it takes the snow ploughs longer to clear the streets. some people have a hard time to clear their driveways. in the cold. blessings my friend. /Darlene/

Tom Cunningham

January 20, 2024 at 2:50 PM

I bet it looks an amazing sight Darlene.. Big storm heading for the uk tomorrow, heavy rain and 80mph winds, Im staying indoors. Tom

Darlene De Beaulieu

January 20, 2024 at 3:17 PM

Hello tom, oh Tom i do not blame you. I wlould not want to go out in wqeather like that. Enjoy your evening. Darlene/

Sotto Poet

January 20, 2024 at 1:01 PM

Bravo, Darlene! I derive immense pleasure from your poetic verses capturing the ethereal essence of a sky devoid of any azure hue, while also vividly depicting streets teeming with a blanket of snow. It is now opportune for the snow plow to commence its duty.

Darlene De Beaulieu

January 20, 2024 at 3:21 PM

Hello Sotto, Yes it is. That will happen later to night. Enjoy your day my friend. Thank you for the .lovely comment. /Darlene/

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 20, 2024 at 12:35 PM

- I have been shoveling snow for a week ... the snow plow has been on the roads day and night ... huge amounts of snow have fallen ... this afternoon plus degrees and rain ... a lot has already melted ... it comes and goes ... but it's beautiful, Darlene - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs

Darlene De Beaulieu

January 20, 2024 at 3:26 PM

Hello Sunshine Smile, Your lucky the snow melted. Here the snow is getting higher. The snow ploughs will come later. In December we hardly had any snow. Nolw too much. Enjoy hyour even ing . Hugs. /Darlene/

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