The Skin I'M In

The skin I’m in has gotten thin
Or more so than it’s ever been.
It now contains such glaring veins
I wonder what, beneath, remains.

A little scratch will soon dispatch
A tiny bit of blood to catch
Which won’t impede but will succeed
In adding worry I don’t need.

Another page regarding age
Reminds me that I’m at the stage
When more and more, what lies in store
Is not the me I was before.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 10/17/2019 9:16:00 PM
This is truly a perfect example as to why I keep coming back to read you ilene. When you've lived as well as you have ilene, it's not a bad thing to be thin skinned. :) This is what you call a two handed typed compliment, not just left handed. :)
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Date: 10/11/2019 12:51:00 PM
This poem applies to me as well, Ilene. If I keep losing weight I will become invisible! To keep my trousers from falling I must now wear a belt, an accessory I rarely did before. Maybe I should consider suspenders instead? I'll be 82 next month, an age I never expected I'd reach, but here I am. / M
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Date: 10/9/2019 11:36:00 PM
Well done!
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Date: 10/9/2019 6:01:00 PM
Nicely done, but according to Antiques Roadshow, sexy old women attract Big Bucks - and you don't even need a Reservation! Also, keep in mind that ancient sexy posters which have weathered many a storm on an old barn still sell for thousands of dollars! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 10/9/2019 4:53:00 PM
Just looked at my hands, yikes I'm turning into my mother! Grabs hand cream and tries to turn back the signs of aging!!! Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/9/2019 2:32:00 PM
Oh so true! Aptly said!
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Date: 10/9/2019 1:42:00 PM
- You can't get away from age, Ilene ... nobody can - but you can age with style :) - A lovely poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/9/2019 9:44:00 AM
Love this. Been observing my own leaning towards lean translucency. ;), xomo
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