The Six

Mommy:
             When you abruptly left me
             on that cold October day,
             your voice was ever silenced,
             but I still had things to say.
Daddy:
             When you followed in her deadly path
             that sunny day in May,
             you escaped your sorrow,
             but so much was left to say.

1st Husband:
             When you stole from me and robbed me blind
             so that you could have your way,
             I was rendered speechless,
             there was nothing left to say.

2nd Husband:
             When I needed you to listen,
             your scorn turned me away,
             mute in isolation,
             I wandered far astray.

Young Lover:
             The next eight years I listened
             to a ranting, raving fool,
             an underlying madness
             that you brandished like a tool.

Twin Soul:
             But now, no words are needed,
             we can read each other's minds,
             my love, my mate, my soul-twin,
             until the end of time.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Suzadail Jr. Avatar
November 25, 2008 at 5:50 PM
Interesting write. Sounds like a lot of the hell may have helpped keep you strong enough to survive and appreciate your soul-twin. Some never achieve that. God Bless. Vince
Richards Avatar
November 24, 2008 at 12:59 PM
Congratulations Danielle, for hanging in there, and finding one whom you can trust. :) Well done, sad but also with a happy ending. God Bless....Carrie
Fawcett Avatar
November 24, 2008 at 11:22 AM
Ah, that is beautiful, Danielle. Love the whole poem, but the last stanza takes my breath away. Love, Nigel
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