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The Singing Card

You see, an exchange of young hearts Calls for flaunt and display After a long wait, finally It was Valentines Day Painted my lips a pretty pink Curled my hair overnight For young lads with hearts in their hands I must have been a sight He came to pick me at five sharp With a solitary red rose And an envelope, very pink That's my color, he knows He gently kissed my cheek as I Opened the envelope ‘To my sweetheart’ the pink card said I was high without dope ‘You are so beautiful’, so it Sang out clear, loud and wide I blushed deep red, he quickly said I meant from the inside A girl needs to hear she's pretty Her eyes gems,her skin silk Inner beauty save for later I blabbered in deep sulk Written on:07/22/2016 Contest:'Pink Domino' by Sara Kendrick

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Date: 7/30/2016 8:48:00 AM
Your wonderful work got my attention! I am so glad to place it in the winners’ list..Congrats to you. Sara
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Date: 7/30/2016 7:11:00 AM
You said it, Sara, a girl does not get all dolled up for her beau to see her "inner beauty". Congratulations on your win. ~karam~
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Date: 7/29/2016 3:59:00 PM
loved the fun ending Sara:-) in 27 years hubby and I have never exchanged valentine's cards lol:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/29/2016 1:12:00 PM
Nice going Sara. Congratulations on your placement in the contest.
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Date: 7/23/2016 10:35:00 AM
OOOH, what a cut, on the inside. Ugggg. That was great fun to read, Sara. I gotta look into this pink contest!!
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