The Singing Card

You see, an exchange of young hearts
Calls for flaunt and display
After a long wait, finally
It was Valentines Day

Painted my lips a pretty pink
Curled my hair overnight
For young lads with hearts in their hands
I must have been a sight

He came to pick me at five sharp
With a solitary red rose
And an envelope, very pink
That's my color, he knows

He gently kissed my cheek as I
Opened the envelope
‘To my sweetheart’ the pink card said
I was high without dope

‘You are so beautiful’, so it
Sang out clear, loud and wide
I blushed deep red, he quickly said
I meant from the inside

A girl needs to hear she's pretty
Her eyes gems,her skin silk
Inner beauty save for later
I blabbered in deep sulk

Written on:07/22/2016
Contest:'Pink Domino' by Sara Kendrick
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Kendrick Avatar
July 30, 2016 at 8:48 AM
Your wonderful work got my attention! I am so glad to place it in the winners’ list..Congrats to you. Sara
Misra Avatar
July 30, 2016 at 7:11 AM
You said it, Sara, a girl does not get all dolled up for her beau to see her "inner beauty". Congratulations on your win. ~karam~
Allison Avatar
July 29, 2016 at 3:59 PM
loved the fun ending Sara:-) in 27 years hubby and I have never exchanged valentine's cards lol:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Medders Tobechi Avatar
July 29, 2016 at 1:12 PM
Nice going Sara. Congratulations on your placement in the contest.
Dietrich Avatar
July 23, 2016 at 10:35 AM
OOOH, what a cut, on the inside. Ugggg. That was great fun to read, Sara. I gotta look into this pink contest!!
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