The Simple Life Nk

one eye opens
a sunrise
messy hair 
sleepy eyes
pearly whites
brush brand new
leave the house
a quarter to

i meet her in a small cafe
she deftly holds my hand
a pretty country girl
blue eyes and nicely tanned
she walks seductively
to our favorite table
I'll reach out and kiss her
just as soon as i am able

date:9/5/22
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Kendrick Avatar
October 21, 2022 at 2:26 AM
Congratulations on this romantic winning work. Way to go. Sara
Groen Avatar
October 25, 2022 at 8:01 PM
Thank you Sara, always a pleasure to hear from you!
Fowler Avatar
October 19, 2022 at 1:56 PM
I love this! Congratulations on your win!
Groen Avatar
October 25, 2022 at 8:02 PM
Thanks for your kind comment, I appreciate it!
Alex Avatar
October 19, 2022 at 2:41 AM
The Simple Life - is simply great. Congratulations!
Groen Avatar
October 25, 2022 at 8:03 PM
Thanks Chris, and you are as well!
Messina Avatar
October 18, 2022 at 3:05 PM
You got me with "A pretty country girl-blue eyed and nicely tanned" (lol) You did this form so well, Geru. Congratulations on your 1st place win! Charlie
Groen Avatar
October 25, 2022 at 8:05 PM
Thanks, Charlie, always a pleasure to join the fun in your great contests!
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace