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The Silent Talk

We were passing along Looked at each other Silently the eyes spoke In the language of love Without utterance; spoke Both of us knew each other In little time; hearts connected Beyond speaking we departed

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/17/2016 1:09:00 AM

F.H.Z, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing you're poetry. LOVE LINDA

Fatima Hasan Zaidi
Date: 3/29/2016 3:20:00 PM

ThANKS Linda

Skat A

Date: 1/14/2016 10:48:00 PM

FATIMA, Awesome write, I really like this. Forever ** SKAT **

Fatima Hasan Zaidi
Date: 3/29/2016 3:20:00 PM

Thank you

Jan Allison

Date: 3/13/2015 7:42:00 PM

I love the romantic imagery here Fatima - eye contact is all it takes! Hugs Jan 7 xxx

Jan Allison
Date: 3/14/2015 7:22:00 AM

It could also relate to someone you met in the street but I do love your doggy story:-) Hugs Jan xx

Fatima Hasan Zaidi
Date: 3/14/2015 4:00:00 AM

Thanks Jan Allison, Actually it was all about a stray doggy :) I saw it and then felt it was hungry, i fed it by biscuits and all we spoke was in eyes silently.