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The Silent Heart

the silent heart has no song to be heard only the loneliness within that echoes across empty rooms where no ear listens where the heavy drapes still the sun so the shadows may proceed unencumbered by desirous longings it is in this i wait for you in remembrances of your touch as tempus fugit embraces me fading lips i long to taste again a reassuring voice rests in quietude lost in an empty room of shadows manacled in darkened depths the abyss in a silent heart has no song to be heard OKC 8/17

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Date: 1/8/2023 2:51:00 PM
Is the heart that still belongs to a memory truly silent? The loneliness here is resonating, yet the longing he feels is tangible. Wonderful Timothy
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Timothy Ray
Date: 1/13/2023 10:01:00 AM
thank you....greatly appreciated
Date: 8/23/2022 7:21:00 AM
Within the sadness of this poem, I felt a lot of veracity and well-expressed emotions, adding strength and conviction. Well done!...ab
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Timothy Ray
Date: 8/23/2022 8:03:00 AM
thank you by the way....it is so refreshing here, avoiding the TMZ crowd....to be with those who sit beneath the bough reading poetic minds
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Timothy Ray
Date: 8/23/2022 8:01:00 AM
a poem such as this reminds me of Ted Hughes "October Salmon" it is much more than a salmon in a few inches of water...it is his observation, inspiration, and imagination that stretches what would be an article in Field and Stream into the fate within life, he moves us from the mortal into the immortal...he uses his personal knowledge of the salmon life to attach them to the bruises of humanity...the long journey...its toll...this is where we live, not in People Magazine

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