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The Silent Breath

Do you hear that
Listen very closely 
It’s so loud and deafening
Now that’s what true silence is
Now do you feel that
The breath you were unconsciously holding fade away.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 3/26/2025 9:13:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 3/22/2025 11:14:00 PM
Beautiful, even if sad.
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