The Silent Alarm

For some reason, this morning her alarm clock failed to sound. With eyes half closed,
 she glanced at the clock.  It was around 8 AM. She got dressed as quickly as     
she could,  hurried to the train station. When the train  arrived; she managed 
 to get a seat . She  put on her glasses and took out her crossword puzzle.   
  She  became lost in the clues. She had finished  one puzzle,  was on to the next,  
when the  voice of the conductor interrupted her thoughts. A delay was announced.   
 As it turned out, the train ahead had derailed.  Many were seriously injured. 
  It was then,  she appreciated the silence of her alarm clock.
                                                    -----


a peal of thunder
  shatters the peace of the day
 rain comes crashing down
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Hunjeri Avatar
July 11, 2015 at 2:52 AM
Hi Joseph, i was looking for Haibun examples. Am glad i ran into this one. The story is very well told #7
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
November 7, 2014 at 11:31 PM
wow!!! love that story and the haiku!!!!! congratulations..! :D
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 7, 2014 at 4:08 PM
Excellent poem Joseph. I love how it was just a story then became an amazing miracle. Congratulations on your win.
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
November 7, 2014 at 10:22 AM
You gave me chills! Excellent haibun, Joseph. Congrats...love and blessings, Rhonda
Guzzi Avatar
November 6, 2014 at 7:26 PM
Hey Joseph you did it, you have reached haikudom! great job. Congrad's Light & Love
May Avatar
November 6, 2014 at 8:26 PM
Thank you so much Debbie ...I got lucky with the haiku...hugs
Yvonne Avatar
November 6, 2014 at 5:27 PM
Added to my Faves Joseph. Just back to congratulate you on your win.
Allison Avatar
November 6, 2014 at 12:49 PM
dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
November 3, 2014 at 8:48 AM
wowowowow, I LOVE this one. to think what may have happened. ... FAVE
A. Sharma Avatar
November 3, 2014 at 6:38 AM
Yes so true wonderfully written! We can't ever predict what's in store for us next! So enjoy the ride , lovely message Joseph!
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 2, 2014 at 7:40 PM
Wow...this brought chills to my skin Joseph. I am so glad I read about the poem first before reading it. I believe that everything happens for a reason even though we may never know that reason. Great writing my friend!
Yvonne Avatar
November 2, 2014 at 7:09 PM
Great write using this ancient form. Also the real stories of this fictional event are quite common. People who for one reason or another just missed what would other wise would have been catastrophic .
Kendrick Avatar
November 2, 2014 at 5:24 PM
Enjoyed reading your work which is so true in many people's lives..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Petersen Potter Avatar
November 2, 2014 at 4:07 PM
A very chilling great story Joseph! Really enjoyed it. You've penned a very intense and compelling haibun. ;) xxxx D.
Guzzi Avatar
November 2, 2014 at 3:21 PM
so true if we only realized how many times we have been saved by a higher power ;) Light & Love
Allison Avatar
November 2, 2014 at 3:04 PM
Oh Gosh Joseph - you have penned a great short story here... I just hope its a fictitious write... it gave me goosebumps reading it! Hugs jan xxx
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