The Silent Alarm

For some reason, this morning her alarm clock failed to sound. With eyes half closed,
 she glanced at the clock.  It was around 8 AM. She got dressed as quickly as     
she could,  hurried to the train station. When the train  arrived; she managed 
 to get a seat . She  put on her glasses and took out her crossword puzzle.   
  She  became lost in the clues. She had finished  one puzzle,  was on to the next,  
when the  voice of the conductor interrupted her thoughts. A delay was announced.   
 As it turned out, the train ahead had derailed.  Many were seriously injured. 
  It was then,  she appreciated the silence of her alarm clock.
                                                    -----


a peal of thunder
  shatters the peace of the day
 rain comes crashing down

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 7/11/2015 2:52:00 AM
Hi Joseph, i was looking for Haibun examples. Am glad i ran into this one. The story is very well told #7
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Date: 11/7/2014 11:31:00 PM
wow!!! love that story and the haiku!!!!! congratulations..! :D
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Date: 11/7/2014 4:08:00 PM
Excellent poem Joseph. I love how it was just a story then became an amazing miracle. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 11/7/2014 10:22:00 AM
You gave me chills! Excellent haibun, Joseph. Congrats...love and blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 11/6/2014 7:26:00 PM
Hey Joseph you did it, you have reached haikudom! great job. Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 11/6/2014 8:26:00 PM
Thank you so much Debbie ...I got lucky with the haiku...hugs
Date: 11/6/2014 5:27:00 PM
Added to my Faves Joseph. Just back to congratulate you on your win.
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Date: 11/6/2014 12:49:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/3/2014 8:48:00 AM
wowowowow, I LOVE this one. to think what may have happened. ... FAVE
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Date: 11/3/2014 6:38:00 AM
Yes so true wonderfully written! We can't ever predict what's in store for us next! So enjoy the ride , lovely message Joseph!
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Date: 11/2/2014 7:40:00 PM
Wow...this brought chills to my skin Joseph. I am so glad I read about the poem first before reading it. I believe that everything happens for a reason even though we may never know that reason. Great writing my friend!
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Date: 11/2/2014 7:09:00 PM
Great write using this ancient form. Also the real stories of this fictional event are quite common. People who for one reason or another just missed what would other wise would have been catastrophic .
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Date: 11/2/2014 5:24:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your work which is so true in many people's lives..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 11/2/2014 4:07:00 PM
A very chilling great story Joseph! Really enjoyed it. You've penned a very intense and compelling haibun. ;) xxxx D.
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Date: 11/2/2014 3:21:00 PM
so true if we only realized how many times we have been saved by a higher power ;) Light & Love
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Date: 11/2/2014 3:04:00 PM
Oh Gosh Joseph - you have penned a great short story here... I just hope its a fictitious write... it gave me goosebumps reading it! Hugs jan xxx
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