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The Silencing of Ben

The headline news this morning read Ben's tolling drones will be shut down while workers clean the cogs in his head He might even get turned upside down Old Ben will be out of ringing commission for four years there will be peace and quiet No gongs will be ringing in noisy emission Ben's being put on a needed silence diet
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Hoffman Avatar
August 23, 2017 at 8:22 PM
So sad that they have to silence Big Ben for four whole years….would love to visit England and see old Ben one day! Nice write and picture Lin!~Che :)
Lane Avatar
August 23, 2017 at 8:25 PM
Thanks very much, Cheryl.
Daniel Avatar
August 23, 2017 at 3:23 AM
Love your take on the Big Ben silencing, Lin:)
Lane Avatar
August 23, 2017 at 5:18 AM
Thank you, Jo.
Sivey Avatar
August 22, 2017 at 5:08 AM
Yes, this is actually a very good thing, He will be in great shape when all is said and done! But He will ring on New Years and other special occasions, probably the Queen's birthday and whatnot! Your poem on this cleaning of Big Ben is quite entertaining, I enjoyed reading this glorious piece this morning! What a beauty, Great Work my friend!!
Lane Avatar
August 23, 2017 at 5:18 AM
Thanks for stopping by, Russell.
Smith Avatar
August 21, 2017 at 4:13 PM
It's amazing that old Ben has endured for as long as he has. I would love to hear him one more time...
Lane Avatar
August 21, 2017 at 8:38 PM
Then perhaps one day you shall, Charlie. Thanks for reading this one.
Andresen Avatar
August 21, 2017 at 12:48 PM
- Ben is old now ... he can rest as long as he wants ... and he needs a make up - I would say it's a happy news ... taking care of the history - Great written, Lin - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Lane Avatar
August 21, 2017 at 8:37 PM
Thank you most sincerely, Anne-Lise.
Allison Avatar
August 21, 2017 at 10:38 AM
There has been a public outcry about the silencing of Big Ben but work needs to be done on the bell or it could remain silent forever:-) hugs jan xx
Lane Avatar
August 21, 2017 at 8:38 PM
Gong be gone...lol
Allison Avatar
August 21, 2017 at 11:09 AM
My son works in the city in London so he would notice it Lin:-) hugs jan xx
Lane Avatar
August 21, 2017 at 10:41 AM
That wouldn't bother me. I have no plans to visit England any time soon.
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