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THE SILENCE THAT WHISPERS

Peaceful as a frozen lake by a quiet winter's dawn still as the silence that whispers to us, like a fawn Drawn to the air in our lungs as we gently engage side by side in a world of great love, rock of Age Let us fly like birds through a world of pure joy where beauty and grace are virtues we deploy Let us live here as one and always keep pace with a heart that is pure, set always in place Composed as the Sun when it beams on the snow with a linger of solitude and a trace of afterglow Quiet as the stars of heaven that exude n' shine late at night in the sky as it turns , red to wine Let us embrace and exist as we breathe in the calm clothing our thoughts with a drop of sweet balm Let us arrive by the rivers of brave and swim free just like the fish in the sea who know how to be, peaceful as a frozen lake by a quiet winter pond, still as the silence that whispers to us at dawn.

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Date: 10/9/2024 9:32:00 PM
Take us with you ~ thank you for sharing, Mystic Rose
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Date: 10/9/2024 12:31:00 AM
This is beautiful multifaceted poem of Love and the longing for peace and tranquillity - Brilliant and the rhyming is impeccable dear Vie, I enjoyed it, thanks for sharing. Hugs Maria
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Date: 10/8/2024 11:52:00 AM
nice poem. A soul poem, well done.
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Date: 10/8/2024 6:38:00 PM
So glad you enjoyed the poem Jay, hope all is well :)
Date: 10/8/2024 9:19:00 AM
Oh my, this is an ethereal poem, dear sweet Rose.. I truly love how you've detailed the soothing essence of silence in so many unique ways that are sincerely soul-touching! I adore your rhymes here and the diction is absolutely gorgeous too. "Peaceful as a frozen lake by a quiet winter's dawn","with a linger of solitude and a trace of afterglow","Quiet as the stars of heaven that exude n' shine..late at night in the sky as it turns , red to wine" Sooo many favorite lines here, beyond magnificent. This is an absolute FAV for me, keep writing, shining and inspiring ~
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Date: 10/8/2024 6:38:00 PM
I always look forward to your brilliant comments that offer so much introspection and appreciation. You make my heart glow Hiya thank you
Date: 10/8/2024 7:31:00 AM
Such peaceful and tranquil words shared by you for the soul. This lovely creation of yours put me at ease and your message is a message we should escape too in this sometimes ugly world. Wonderfully written. Thank you for posting I needed to read this today Dear...
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Date: 10/8/2024 6:37:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed the poem dear Michael, so good to see you here !
Date: 10/8/2024 7:20:00 AM
Beautifully written! Well done.
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Date: 10/8/2024 6:37:00 PM
Thankyou for your lovely visit on my page Daisy
Date: 10/8/2024 5:57:00 AM
Hello Rose, I found the words of your poem very soothing. The line , “ let us fly like birds through a world of pure joy”. Beautifully written, my friend.
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Date: 10/8/2024 6:37:00 PM
Thankyou for your sweet comment dear Zyrool

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