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The Silence of the Moment

Standing in the silence of the moment The bells having rung their last toll I’m left with the warmth of my memories And a peace washes over my soul The sun whispers farewell on the horizon With life’s book turned to the final page The creator gives me the signal It’s time that I exit this stage

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 3/16/2023 8:32:00 AM
This is how everyone’s life should end, Darrell! Well done!
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Date: 3/16/2023 8:58:00 AM
Thank you for the kind comment. I’m thrilled you found a bit of peace within it. Have a wonderful day. Darrell
Date: 3/16/2023 3:32:00 AM
Such a peaceful and happily resigned ending. Well written and succinct.
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Date: 3/16/2023 8:56:00 AM
Thank you for reading the work and the kind comment. Have a wonderful day ! Darrell
Date: 3/16/2023 3:28:00 AM
Fantastic write. Sure would make a great epitaph.
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Date: 3/16/2023 8:54:00 AM
Thank you for the kind words. I’m glad you enjoyed the peace of the moment….silent and still…. Darrell

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